Oh Lord

cast me into shadow
throw me to the hell
my loyalty has been questioned
against my will
my love has no love for me now
tell me why always me and how?
no reason to live in this dreary world
my devotions
my prayers
my artistic persuasions
take away all I have 
now  there is no need to live
with a pensive heart 
no reason to proclaim
while I have been disdained
with my open heart 
i beg you
now tell you to tell him
I  loved, only loved
but cast me into shadow
throw me to the hell






sorry all of u ...and i beg u guys just forgive me for this mundane piece.....sorry 
again !
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Callus Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 10:51 AM
A moment of indecision, dejection and rejection...very sad, Smriti. We have to learn not to give up but rely on hope and faith; pain could quite easily turn to joy! // paul
Dufresne Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 7:29 PM
We all feel like this at one time or another! You expressed your feelings well!
Sweetheart Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 9:09 PM
very impassioned please Smriti .. your expressions are very eloquent my friend.. enjoyed with luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 3:46 PM
meaningful atonement, smriti
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