Oh I See

oh i see how it is
yes i finally do
that i am his
i see that i'm not with you

it makes sense it does
all these questions lost
the reason no longer just because
all the looks all the time we faught

oh i see how it came to this
an endless battle finally, done
hit to the ground leaving me breathless
i am glad that you nor i had won

it is over for that i'm thankfull
but i do still wish sometimes
you were by my side so full
of your laughter never the cries

oh i see how it is
yes i finally do
that i am his
but do you 

see how it is?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 11:36 PM
Very creative Autumn Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Anish Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 9:07 PM
Good description of a bad situation. Faught should be fought- trivial spelling error. Thank you for all your kind words. Yours Matthew Anish
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 12:00 PM
Interesting topic. Sara
Chircop Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 12:15 AM
deep and touching--charma
Moreno Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 7:10 PM
Heartfelt words...Raul
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