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Oh I See

oh i see how it is yes i finally do that i am his i see that i'm not with you it makes sense it does all these questions lost the reason no longer just because all the looks all the time we faught oh i see how it came to this an endless battle finally, done hit to the ground leaving me breathless i am glad that you nor i had won it is over for that i'm thankfull but i do still wish sometimes you were by my side so full of your laughter never the cries oh i see how it is yes i finally do that i am his but do you see how it is?

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Date: 9/6/2009 11:36:00 PM
Very creative Autumn Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 9/6/2009 9:07:00 PM
Good description of a bad situation. Faught should be fought- trivial spelling error. Thank you for all your kind words. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:00:00 PM
Interesting topic. Sara
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:15:00 AM
deep and touching--charma
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Date: 9/5/2009 7:10:00 PM
Heartfelt words...Raul
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