Oh Goddess Moon

Oh Goddess Moon, you induce painters to paint,
the crazed to rave and poets to praise your grace.
How many love affairs have you helped to consummate?
With a woman’s many wiles, you change your shape.
How you beguile, yet never do you vacillate.
You stay your course and never stray!

Like yin to yang, you are to sun a cool and pallid pool,
changing, yet constant in your rule 
as you steadfastly move from New to Quarter To Gibbous to Full, 
and then you wane . . . 
till in Crescent Balsamic you reign -
there to shortly contemplate the wisdom you have gained.
Your fortnight ended, you journey back again.

We all beneath you are an ocean mystically pulled,
heirs to the gifts you weave at the time we are born.
Like our predecessors who learned to heed
your rhythmic sounds as they planted seed,
it would behoove us, with our vast technology,
to stop and study the sky, your teachings there to see!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA --
Devnath  Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Congrats my lovely friend on your win with placement. Loved always,bl
A. Sharma Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:10 AM
Congrats on another awesome win with this wonderful write Andrea!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 3:01 AM
This is excellent Andrea! Congratulations on your wonderful win. I meant to enter one of my many moon poems but time got away from me.
A  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT**
K. Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 11:41 AM
This sure is a Beauty, Andrea!! I really love how you spoke to the moon here, and just put the spotlight on her, you sure covered so much in this artfully written poem, and as always you make it look so easy, how you made everything flow and melodic. I love poems about the moon, and this one really shows how much of an inspiration it can be-- I've always wanted to include all the phases of the moon, and you did so here, with such grace--in a word-- I find this poem to be Divine!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 7:50 AM
A truly impressive win with few winners Andrea. I knew this one would come in on top. Big congrats. Love to see this posted at pft. Hugs, Connie
Nance Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 3:49 PM
glad to see this tops! i love it girl!
Onclaud Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 10:28 PM
all the way to the top with this lyrical interpretation of luna... my bestest congrats, andie!
Arowolo Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 12:32 PM
Beautiful and lovely piece,Andrea..congrats on your win..
Mcintosh Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your win... Love and prayers, Gina
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 11:24 PM
Real serene n wow write Andrea! Congrats on top place win!
May Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 9:30 PM
Ah yes ....brilliant write Andrea...Congrats on your win
Chutani Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 7:24 PM
Andrea, what a smooth flow, just like the cycle of the moon you portrayed. congrats. Mohan
Merritt Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Andrea strikes again ! I wish I could weave words of this caliber; you are awesome ! "...there to shortly contemplate the wisdom you have gained"...I think the wisdom is all your own, reflected in this VERY GOOD poem. I love you, Andrea !
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 4:47 PM
Prodigious winner..Way to go..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Devnath  Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 3:33 PM
Congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Arowolo Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:51 PM
Beautiful and lovely piece,Andrea..Congrats on your superb win..
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:31 PM
many congrats on hitting the top sport. Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 12:52 PM
If the moon could only read this I'm sure it would be honored. Congratulations on your win.
Roberts Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 12:45 PM
stunning as always, congrats on making the winners list in my contest Andrea
Crawford Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 11:05 PM
goddess moon indeed. i luv this. makes me feel one w/ the universe
May Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Great write Andrea....I love it...hugs
Horsman Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 5:05 PM
wonderful poetry, Andrea....again you open one's eyes
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