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Oh God Let Me Know One Thing

Oh! God let me know one thing Why you have made a difference within Rich,medium and poor one? Though they are your sons. Having eyes, ears, tongue, skin, and nose, May differ in flows Yet we look same, little bit different fame That's why you have made difference damn. I have heard from many peoples If people do bad things in this era Then, definitely they get worst in next era Oh! Yeah ! They are right!? that's why you have made a differene tight !!

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Date: 10/16/2018 5:59:00 PM
Is 'era' reincarnation? Are you Hindu-puji? Who are the people you 'have heard from' in your last stanza? What is punctuation > !? supposed to mean? Please write in Sanskrit. (and write slowly) Why are you rushing?
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Anushruti Singh
Date: 10/16/2018 9:55:00 PM
Yes you got all points .. so I didn't think that I hv to explain it... Yes, era is reincarnation. Yes I am hindu-puji. Whether from whom I have heard it's none of your bussiness ... I just put my own thinking nd opinion .. and it's my choice whether I write in english hindi sanskrit punjabi or any else language .. keep your nose away from my pocket if you didn't like it .. I am rushing because I feel and do in my own way ok
Date: 10/3/2018 9:46:00 AM
I have often wondered the same thing, believing spiritually we are all part of each other.
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Anushruti Singh
Date: 10/16/2018 9:49:00 PM
Than you so much mam .. attention from you means a lot for me

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