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Oh Foolish Man

Oh foolish man, how dare you interpret your Manly roar To a lionesses protection Oh, foolish man If only you could see into a female's heart, How fierce, how noble, how pure, It's very being, vibrating with love With hope, and sometimes, yes, with blindness, Oh, how we suffer, only to produce another, possible foolish man into the world oh, think twice, Just another day in living In your own fool's paradise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/6/2010 9:28:00 AM
well done nice write here tanya
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Date: 11/4/2010 5:25:00 PM
Hey Tanya Congratz on this weeks feature. See you have what it takes. so without sounding rude MORE PLEASE
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Tanya. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2010 2:19:00 AM
a riveting piece peppered with rich language.. congrats on being feaured this week, tanya warmest, nette
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Date: 10/31/2010 9:10:00 AM
The Sweet Gum Tree is beautiful in the fall..The leaves can be yellow or a burgundy or cimson red color..I have never seen one out where it could take shape uncrowded..I have always seen them in a wooded setting..They tend to grow lean and tall in a crowded wooded setting...Sara
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Date: 10/31/2010 9:07:00 AM
The male of the species can act foolishly sometimes..Some are worse than the others..Also we females do the same sorry to have to say..I enjoyed your work and I had to chuckle at the fact that we bring those foolish males into the world but don't we have high hopes for them..We are just like the ant that has high hopes of moving a RubberTree Plant..Glad that I chose this one to read today..I am glad that you understood my poem..Just for you I may write another using a different end.continued..SK
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:16:00 AM
May your weekend be one of amazing inspiration Tanya. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and thank you so much for sharing it with us. Love and blessings always, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2010 6:36:00 AM
Also want to welcome you to the soup..look forward to reading more of your poems in future...thanks for taking time out to read my work...Always Michael
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Date: 10/30/2010 5:43:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry today .. with its creative theme.. hope u check our the contest scene offered to new members ..good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/29/2010 10:23:00 PM
Sawubona Tanya. Welcome to the soup. I really injoyed you poem today home girl. Howzit in S.A? If you need and help getting round contact me or Wilma :-)
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Date: 10/29/2010 2:01:00 PM
Very enjoyed as always
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