Oh Fate

We grow up together, simple and fair
But we fawn over leaving, "Oh how life is bare!"
We think to ourselves, "One day I'll be out of here!"
Yet our ignorance spoon feeds us, into the mouth of fear.

Oh fate! How you promised bliss, 
yet this is not at all
Why do you trick me mischievously?
Is it just to see me fall?

We grieve in woe; for our fortune is unfortunate,
For freedom isn't free
What's this price to pay? The cost? Bring life back to me! 
Oh fate! Your tale-telling lies! You spin the yarn of life!
We believe you and pass through, our ego tells us we are right.

But we mustn't be, for this cannot be real
Our lives torn apart, and unto the spinning wheel.
Back to fate, we go; home to the ferocious beast
To hear more fairy tales pass through our ears,
"Ignorance is bliss!" It makes us plead!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Pickens  Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 4:17 PM
Great write! :) I found you in the best new poets page. I am #5 check out my work as well.
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June 9, 2014 at 7:43 AM
MaryEllen, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 6:52 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured,
Walker  Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 1:01 AM
Congrats on your win..hugs Verlena
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May 23, 2014 at 10:26 AM
MARYELLEN, Congratulations, . I hope you don't mind your placement in my contest. Out of past experience, I know many don't like when I don't have a first or second placement. However, this is my judgment, and it only feels right, to place each poem, in the order I would have, as if there had been a first or second placement. Believe me, I'm not taking from you or your winning poem. Hugs, and enjoy my blog, "Conundrum" if you'd like. Have yourself a sweet day. ...always Linda
Hamilton Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 6:06 PM
a lovely poem Mary full of emotion it is not a sonnet though it is verse a sonnet is 14 lines with meter and rhyme that aside I love it keep writing you show a lot of promise and welcome to soup hugs
Hyler Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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