Jeff Kyser Poet Rhyme

Oh Citrus, My Mistress

Oh citrus, my mistress
Exquisite, delicious
Appealing, revealing
No zestier feeling
Acidic confections
Ascerbic dilections
So tangy, so tasty
The tart in a pastry
A scurvy elixir
A fine tonic mixer
Nutritious, sumptuous
Mouth-watering, scrumptious
Exquisite, delicious
Oh citrus, my mistress

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I don't think it is a McWhirtle, probably iambic trimeter? Dunno.
H/T to Robert Gorelick for "My Darling Lime"

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Robert Gorelick March 2, 2022 at 2:10 PM A new and improved version. Thank you for the accolade...Robert Jeff Kyser March 2, 2022 at 2:37 PM Just different - I liked yours a lot. Isn't imitation the best form of flattery? :-)