Oh, Christmas Tree

An unusual thing occurred at our house Christmas Eve.
It caused us anger, it was enough to make us grieve.

We waited to the last minute for a live Christmas tree:
A brimful tree of precise size, with perfect symmetry.

On Christmas Eve, we pulled it inside the house to trim.
As we tugged it through, we discovered something grim.

Although the tree was green, it was dead as a doornail.
As we carried it in, pine needles rained down like hail.

It was too late to find another tree, the problem to rectify.
“We can’t have Christmas without a tree,” I wanted to cry.

Long gone the days to trek into woods & chop one down.
I wanted to stomp my foot, I wanted someone to crown.

Not only was there no tree, we vacuumed piles of needles.
“Honey, we need an artificial Christmas tree,” I wheedled.

 ‘After Christmas sales,’ afforded us a great opportunity.
  Now, I can decorate the tree each year, with impunity.

  No worry about limbs drooping, no watering to do. I
   like the convenience. I like the look of it too. After 

                                   all, 
                                   it’s 
                                   not 
                               the tree 
                            that counts, 
                       it’s what’s under it. 
                        Don’t you agree?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/7/2015 10:34:00 AM
Great poem ! I like it !
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Cona Adams
Date: 4/7/2015 12:25:00 PM
Thank you, Yoni, for taking the time to read and comment. All the best!
Date: 12/5/2014 5:50:00 PM
very nice,fun read
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Cona Adams
Date: 12/6/2014 6:55:00 AM
Thank you, Robert. In my documents, it is a concrete poem, in the shape of a Christmas tree. But I am unable to get it to transfer correctly.
Date: 12/5/2014 2:20:00 PM
We have never had a real tree cona - and its who is around the tree that REALLY counts and not what is underneath it:-) Hugs jan xx
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Cona Adams
Date: 12/6/2014 7:17:00 AM
Of course, I totally agree, Jan. But it was comical to watch everyone's reaction when they walked into the living room on Christmas Eve, and saw no tree. "What, NO TREE? We can't have Christmas without a tree!" I just had to give them a little dig.
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Cona Adams
Date: 12/6/2014 7:13:00 AM
Of course I totally agree, Jan. But it was comical to watch how our kids and grand-kids reacted to walking in on Christmas Eve, and seeing no tree in the living room. "What, NO TREE? We can't have Christmas without a tree!" I just had to give them a little dig.
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