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Oh, dandelion Your blossom of gold endures Warmth to a cold day The strength of sunlight Is sometimes diminished by Grey clouds that drape Earth... With a soiled blanket Of piercing melancholy Yet you glow, undimmed Would you make my wish come true after I blow you... to the passing breeze? Date written and posted: 04/15/2019

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Date: 4/17/2019 12:14:00 AM
I too like the last line a lot.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/17/2019 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, Allen:-)
Date: 4/16/2019 12:05:00 PM
Very nice. I love the last line, yet you glow undimmed :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/16/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi:-)

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