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Oh, dandelion
  Your blossom of gold endures
        Warmth to a cold day

      The strength of sunlight
   Is sometimes diminished by
  Grey clouds that drape Earth...

        With a soiled blanket
       Of piercing melancholy
      Yet you glow, undimmed

      Would you make my wish
     come true after I blow you...
        to the passing breeze?


Date written and posted: 04/15/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/17/2019 12:14:00 AM
I too like the last line a lot.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/17/2019 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, Allen:-)
Date: 4/16/2019 12:05:00 PM
Very nice. I love the last line, yet you glow undimmed :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/16/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi:-)

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