Offensive Talker

Mouthy, offensive
Talking rudely out of turn
Learning deficits

Classroom victims-child
Awaiting salvation, and
Great education!


I wrote this for my son, who goes to school and got punished because of the groups wrongly 
talking too much, he felt it wasn't fair. I have been there too.
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November 13, 2009 at 10:30 AM
Nice! Great Haiku!
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November 2, 2009 at 6:37 PM
Been there done that too...Tell him not to feel bad...Teachers are unfair a lot of the time..Marty
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November 2, 2009 at 1:27 PM
I have been there also. The teacher apologied to me before hitting me twice with a ruler on my palm. She said I know that it was not you but I have to punish the whole class. Tell him that Granny feels for him. Keep writing. Mom
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