Jimmy Anderson Poet Rhyme

Off Track - a Collaboration With Curtis Davis

I can feel the darkness trying to swallow me whole.
Emotionally I'm a mess, and I feel I'm losing my soul!
The pain just aches causing me to lose consciousness.
So many mistakes and I never thought of the consequences.
I'm absolutely alone, and I'm desperately trying to get back.
A loneliness like I've never known, the day I stepped away from that track!

Being confined has refined the mind to get back on track;
Lack of affection produced a yearning desire, my fire requires freedom!
Hope has kept me inspired, I'm seeking a wounded soul to mold;
One who can hold my thoughts, I may obtain the antidote towards her pain.
If she's out there, then maybe we can ride the train  while we explain;
How to get on the same track of happiness after all the sadness.....


Note: I wrote first stanza.  My brother in this struggle wrote the second 
stanza.  To say "hey" to this fine poet you may write him at:
Curtis Davis, P. O. Box 506, Maura NC  28554

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Deb Wilson January 9, 2011 at 7:43 AM I can feel the sadness expressed in this and yet there is hope within also..Good job Jimmy and Curtis! love,Deb

Dr.Ram Mehta January 6, 2011 at 3:59 AM I enjoyed the sentiments and emotions so well expressed in this write in collboration, Jimmy

Wilma Neels January 5, 2011 at 12:40 PM A stunning collaboration Jimmy & Curtis.. An emotion filled write and much enjoyed by me ;)