Off To See the Wiz

OFF TO SEE THE WIZ Here I am: that “horse of a different color”, purple, pink and white off to see the wizard to ask for wings for flight. I’m trotting hot to see the Wiz who I heard can do a lot like giving the Scarecrow a brain so he could actually appear sane! And that coward, the Lion, wanted to be brave. Poor little Dorothy, he really wanted to save. The Tinman was just an empty can. He had no beating heart but now he’s in love with a pretty little tart. So surely he’ll give me wings so I can sail above as poor homesick Dorothy dreams about the home she loves. She has a beautiful voice and if she had her choice she’d get her wish to fly too over the rainbow like the bluebirds do. She could ride upon my back and we’d sail through the sky over the beautiful rainbow. Oh, how I wish I could fly! By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: 11/23/2018 "All Rights Reserved"
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Krutsinger Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 8:55 PM
I love the whimsy and creativity of this one. It appealed to me in every way, maybe too because I live in Kansas and love The Wizard of Oz.
Duet Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 9:51 PM
Thanks, Caren. I love The Wizard of Oz too...hence, this poem. It looks like the video doesn't work any more though. It was the iconic song with the original characters in it Anyway, I'm so glad you liked this one. Carole :D
Pappadogiannis Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Oh, this is such a lovely poem, Carole. Loved it! Congratulations on your win :) x
Duet Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Thank you so much, Francesca. Carole :D
Allison Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 5:42 AM
You flew to the top of the list with this one Carole, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Duet Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Thank you, Jan. Carole :D
Roper Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 10:52 PM
Great imagination and imagery, Carole, enjoyed reading. .. ... .Congratulations on your 1st place win!
Duet Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Thanks, Eve. Carole :D
May Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Congrats on your top win Carol..
Duet Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Thanks, Joseph. Carole :D
Messina Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 5:32 AM
Wouldn't it be lovely to fly...lol Love this one, Carole. Congratulations on your top win and thank you for supporting my contest...Happy Holidays :) Charlie
Duet Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie. I never expected to get a 1st place. I am so surprised and happy. Happy holidays to you too! Carole :D
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 6:01 PM
I hope he makes you into a unicorn pegasus! For that you are when you write, Eve!
Duet Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Thanks, Andrea. i love unicorns, but I'm NOT Eve! lol Carole :D
Horsman Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Not only a trip down memory lane, but a journey into your wonderful poetry,,love this,
Duet Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Well thank you so much, Harry! What a nice comment.... Carole :D
Williams Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 11:21 PM
Excellent poem Carole. Great rhyming, and dear to my heart the movie. Watched it so many times. I love this version of the song, I see from below that you are going to attach a video. Maybe you can consider this one. A fave for sure https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1bFr2SWP1I
Duet Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Thank you, Maria, for your lovely comment, the FAVE and for the video suggestion. Carole :D
One Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Excellent take on this theme... great flow and rhymes...
Duet Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Thanks, ZZ. Carole :D
Milligan Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 4:33 PM
This was FUN to read!!! Thank you for taking me on a trip down memory lane! :)
Duet Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 6:26 PM
You are welcome, Ian, and thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Carole :D
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