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This wasn't planned, I don't know what to say Just feel crammed, this writer's block won't go away So I thought I shouldn't think Maybe take an extended blink Stare into the darkness and feel the dark I see Stare at the empty to try and fix the emptiness in me Can't think of much else to talk about But if you feel a certain way you need to shout it out So they can hear you from the far back Because shame will lead back into the black Don't ever be ashamed to feel Feelings are the only way to truly know we're real, Hope you liked this little "freestyle" And as you read it, I hope it made you smile

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Date: 3/12/2021 11:15:00 AM
Eric, it did make me smile. There's a good message in your verse. I think you mean "hear" instead of "here," though. You might want to fix that! Thanks for sharing.
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Eric Schojan
Date: 3/12/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thank you!! Glad you read and enjoyed!!

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