Off On a Cloud

Sitting in your silence can be so loud
Not at all like floating off on a cloud
Visions of an angry one caught in a snare
The beating of the drum that fills the air
And of those who are blind to beyond
All of the things to which they have grown fond
To look to that great mirror of life
And feel all those disapointments and strife
Examine the haunts and fears as much as wish
While life will go on without you on the list
All of the haunts and demons that abound
There in the mirror they too can be found
Always looking for some sort of peace
Never to come offer that sweet release
When all that we are and all that we see
Far away from mankind and owned property
That peace is there inside the looking glass
Broken from being thrown down on the grass
To blow the mind with a forceful blast
Trying to hold on to all that has passed
Still listening hard for what that little voice has to say
But I accept that we don't always get our way
So when sitting in your silence can be so loud
I choose to go floating off on a cloud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 6:56 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Scarlett. Love and best wishes always, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 1:20 PM
Like the start where descriptiveness of anger's silence tells the story...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..About the blue eyes and blue jeans...Sorry so long in returning the comment been on vacation..Sara
Hilliker Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 9:11 AM
Silence can be loud. Nicely written poem. I enjoyed reading it today.
Delacroix Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 4:35 PM
Interesting write, Scarlett. A lot of thoughts put into this. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem today. Best wishes, Caroline.
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 11:08 AM
Another fasinating write Scarlett. Sending you Soupmail. Love, Carol
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May 24, 2010 at 5:36 PM
ENJOYED THIS WRITE
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