Njeri Hunjeri Poet I do not know?

Off My Day

Feels like writing a depressing one on this day
Am pretty irritated now, with no reason why
I feel like I want to jump out of my skin, into a bin

Oh I know what I did last night, what a sin
This is my punishment, so I have to chin up
This is my fate, which comes as a twin

And then this girl this morning, comes to me running
She says she's kin, am like from what fin
I know I haven't been drinking gin, feels like I need a gym

Oh wait, that's history now, less worry to my life

Going back to that girl, I wonder if she can twirl
I'd like to give her a hurl
Oh I know that would hurt

Oops this girl needs to divert
And focus on being a flirt

Oh wait, i can blame dessert 
For the sugar overload!

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Lewis Nyaga February 21, 2015 at 1:04 AM Nice one njeri seems like Ryme to me the words are like lyrical punches i love it sorry you were down but taking it out on a pen is the greatest therapy Njeri Hunjeri February 21, 2015 at 8:13 PM And thanks for the suggestions about the form for this poem. Men, I think the hardest part for me is trying to figure it out all these different forms. Njeri Hunjeri February 21, 2015 at 8:10 PM Thanks Lewis. But I kinda put myself in that state, so I only blame me. Anyway am ok now.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 20, 2015 at 8:31 AM Hi Njeri the next time you get a day off, try lemon juice. I can't think of sugar overload..really ..I am diabetic. Love Njeri Hunjeri February 21, 2015 at 8:08 PM Yes too much sugar would not be good for you. But neither is it to me. Its like I cant resist from sweets esp as I tend to eat too much. I always have a sick horrible feeling the following day, almost like a hangover. Not good. Anyway thanks for visiting my work.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 20, 2015 at 7:38 AM creative plot.. you got me reading til the end.. :)! i like the elixir of feelings you put me through as I read along.. :) thanks for visiting my poems.. :)!//olive eloisa Njeri Hunjeri February 21, 2015 at 8:03 PM Thanks for visiting my poems too, Olive. Am glad u enjoyed this one:)