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Of the Life, the Great Loss, the Solemn Plea

Of The Life, The Great Loss, The Solemn Plea Across the cold chasm of that great divide were flung the salty tears I could not hide and epic darkness of a weeping soul aching sorrows that took a heavy toll O'gasping voice- shall thy complaints be heard by whispering wind or by poet's word in that a life mystery there gave birth from those youthful days and innocent mirth pray I, joy again of a much freer me with swifter rescue from despair's aching sea! O'mercy, dare thee this heart quickly heal bless this soul, renewing love's dancing zeal cast happy net, its loving gems therein reap beauty and truth, gems to forever keep whilst in my pleadings- I beg for much more than unjust solitude on a foreign shore remember what you asked me to swear now failure- my loss more than I can bear may I sworn rendezvous now truly keep and you forgive me before my final sleep! Fated were the blues of that darkest day perhaps even these words I must now say you my darling, were everything to me but of freedom's needs, we could not agree I that sought far, far more than was my due live now despondent despair missing you can you feel intense pain of this broken heart with your tender heart gift us a restart gift our lives, treasure of renewed love so again, we may kiss 'neath Heavens above! O'mercy, dare thee this heart quickly heal bless this soul, renewing love's dancing zeal cast happy net, its loving gems therein reap beauty and truth, gems to forever keep? R.J. Lindley July 17th, 1976 Romanticism, ( The Sorrows Of A Love Lost ) Old note, July 17th, 1976 : deleted New Note: 6-14-2021 This is from my ancient graveyard of hidden poems. Another time that in my youth I went far astray I when looking back, see it like it was yesterday And can yet again feel the pangs of a love destroyed This may now, see the bright cleansing light of day From wild youth, when I once let my vanity hold sway. Decided to not edit this, leave it as was written when in throes of deepest sorrows, heart was cut to shreds..

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Date: 6/17/2021 9:14:00 PM
Robert, 'ancient graveyard of hidden poems'. Your poem melds so well with Mozart' Requiem v. Lacrimosa dies illa -Richard
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/18/2021 8:42:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I am not very knowledgeable about Mozart myself - except to know that he was a very great musical genius and deeply adored by millions of music fans today.. God bless....
Date: 6/16/2021 6:49:00 AM
Beauty and truth-- gems forever to keep--your poem resonates in love and romance, and sorrow of love lost. Thank you for sharing this beauty from your past. Not many are as talented as you on Soup who can create such masterpieces. I am saving this in my FAVES.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/18/2021 8:38:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Always a delight reading your replies and gaining your keen insight on my creations. God bless..
Date: 6/14/2021 11:51:00 AM
The loss of love in youth can be almost unbearable. I believe that we learn that parting from someone as we grow older may be best for us. But in youth love is everything and the loss of it rips us apart. I am glad that you didn’t change anything in this wonderful poem Robert. It is perfect as is. I can relate. Thank you for sharing this gem. Blessings Connie xxoo
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2021 11:57:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. You are so very correct. I remember that then it was as if suddenly the world ended. Now with age, ensuing years flown by, a bit more wisdom- I see it as a learning experience that millions likely go through. And even understand her thoughts so very much better..... What does not kill you, so oft makes you stronger. God bless...
Date: 6/14/2021 10:30:00 AM
Even when love is lost it leaves behind a legacy, a gem that cannot be stolen from our memory. Beautifully crafted dear poet, have a blessed day Robert.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2021 11:52:00 AM
Thank you my friend. The legacy part is not only true but has inspired several poems in the past. As I age I see it differently and the poems reflect that sad realization. Once I blamed her, now I place far more blame on myself.. God bless.
Date: 6/14/2021 10:13:00 AM
Amazing Robert. So happy there was a resurrection in your "graveyard of hidden poems." You have treated us with this gem. Have you ever thought about that phrase as a theme for a new poem? Thank you for sharing your journey. Blessings! Sam~
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2021 1:46:00 PM
My friend, your idea has now been put to use. Pen and paper saw verses fly and poem is now presented on my homepage here. Thanks very much for the inspiration gifted me. .. God bless...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2021 11:50:00 AM
Thank you my friend, I appreciate your reading and commenting. An very intriguing idea my friend. One that I think I will use by starting a poem sometime today! God bless.

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