Of Sobbing Flames

Love's last light throws ember shadows
sighing coals cast waning arrows
of sobbing flame on lukewarm ground;
twilight spits into the fire,
but cannot slake my starved desire,
bereaved heart cloaked in misery's gown.
How dare Cupid so fickle turn
exchanging smiles for face now stern
stealing my regal red rose crown.


©Faye Lanham Gibson, June 12, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Inyoureyes Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 1:57 AM
Wow,thus is amazing.
Inyoureyes Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 1:57 AM
This
Lindley Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Big congrats on your fine win!!!! bravoooooo
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 6:35 PM
Love your imagery in here. One of the best on the list!! Congrats, Faye.
Onclaud Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 3:32 PM
the feeling of loss grabbed me, faye.. superbly constructed!.. cheers for the fine win in my challenge.. huggs
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 3:18 PM
beautiful imagery tinged with sadness. a well deserved winner. hugs jan x
Callus Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 2:01 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Faye, though shrouded in a sad atmosphere. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
Chutani Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 12:21 PM
Faye, a nice poem and congrats for the win. Mohan
Mehta Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 10:13 AM
Nice take on the theme of lost love, good luck, Faye
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