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Of Rats and Mice

I am in my house,
With a panicked mouse.
Coming back from the fridge
Going through the sand-ridge
Into its hole in a jiffy
Then squeaking out - Yippee !

Then come two rats
With a hard pat on the back
Running along with its mate
Making things obfuscate
Around the bagful of nickels
Crossing the jar full of pickles

The rat and its mate came back trotting
With a block of cheese that was rotting
After some time in a line
Came a parade f rats and mice
With and hats and lice.

Everyone was mournful
But a mouse eating a mouthful
Who was happy and glad
Was making everyone sad.

He ate with nosh
Wearing a hat that was posh
After hogging and stuffing
He got up puffing,
Ready for his quest
Sqeaking good bye to the rest,
He leaped across a runnel
And ran into a thicket
Never to be spotted again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/21/2016 2:36:00 PM
Madhavi Mohalik, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2015 1:43:00 PM
MADHAVI, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 10/12/2014 11:39:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Madhavi- I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/11/2014 1:55:00 PM
humorous poem! I enjoyed it. Cheers! xxx D.
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Date: 10/11/2014 1:36:00 PM
A problem about mice and men. Rats are free. Any takers? A nice poem. Good luck, Madhavi.
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