Michael Dom Poet Cinquain

Of Raindrops

Raindrops
On tin rooftops 
Wash away dirt and dust 
And broken gutters make a nice
Shower

Raindrops
On tin rooftops 
Encore of happiness 
Children splashing on flooded lawns
Rejoice

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Yanny Widjanarko July 11, 2013 at 8:53 PM Wow, this is really exciting and refreshing poem :D love it Mike :D wishing you a great day there :D hug, Yanny

Richard Lamoureux July 9, 2013 at 7:36 AM I like this picture you have painted. Michael Dom July 11, 2013 at 10:07 AM Richard, I thank you for your appreciation.

Timothy Hicks June 21, 2013 at 1:40 AM It's a wonderful sound, raindrops on tin roofs. Just puts your mind at rest. Well penned cinquains... I enjoyed it's simplicity. Michael Dom July 11, 2013 at 10:08 AM Timothy, simplicity appeals to me. I thank you for your appreciation.