Krish Radhakrishna Poet Quintain (English)

Of Mans First Temptation Tm

Apple
half bitten part
satanic example
of how gift of iPhone can start
love dart!


1st Placement
Written 19/12/2020
Sara Kendrick sponsored
Trademark Quintain poetry contest
2,4,6,8,2 syllable
ababb rhyme

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Rama Balasubramanian December 31, 2020 at 10:16 AM Congratulations Krish. There are two poems I wrote one on doctors treating Corona patients and other you see for yourself. Wishing you a happy new year once again. Take care, Rama Krish Radhakrishna January 1, 2021 at 1:38 AM Rama thank you and I am humbled by your very kind gesture! It shows what a clean hearted person you are!! My blessings and Good wishes for the New Year to you and your family!!

Sara Kendrick December 31, 2020 at 9:37 AM Now I wonder if a little taste of brand names leads one deeper and deeper? Creative work. Thanks for participating in my contest. Sara Krish Radhakrishna January 1, 2021 at 1:19 AM Sara, thanks for the generosity of my placement and for a unique contest! very different! well done! a Very Happy New Year to you!!

Gershon Wolf December 19, 2020 at 4:54 PM Very clever, maestro!! Ingenious write. G.L. in the contest. Happiness and Light, Gershon Krish Radhakrishna December 24, 2020 at 12:49 PM Thanks Gershon. It was a Newtonian moment with the Apple!:)