Of Love

A feeling of euphoria,
a woman and a rose,
a long, committed partnership,
of love the husband knows.

A tenuous and abstract thing
of love he understands--
or thinks he does until they
place a baby in his hands.

A miracle, a wonder who
can bring him to his knees,
who grips his heart with fear at
every cough and baby sneeze.

She calls to him in silent nights,
the deepest sleep defeats.
She holds his breath in hostage till
he knows her heart still beats.

Behold, the hulking man of men
of beastly, manly powers
who’s brought to tears by tiny fists
with gifts of mangled flowers.

A feeling of euphoria,
a little girl, a rose,
a dirty face, a sloppy kiss--
of love the father knows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/26/2011 10:26:00 AM
You artfully describe the emasculating effects of a baby on a macho man.
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:28:00 AM
im gunna cry...u rock!!
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:14:00 PM
it great
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:07:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write and theme today.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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