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I sure hope I put no E's in this lipogram poem. So difficult to do this!! Please, anyone, let me know if you spot an E in my poem!

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Lollygagging scaly lizards lying on dry land; Tiny slimy sluggish snails crawling in long trails; Small stygian scorpions springing up from sand to kill with fast-slashing claws and horrid stinging tails! Big outlandish parrots saucy and too shrill - not as any owls I know, hoot-hooting all through night. Calling from a willow’s limb – a tawny whippoorwill; Sailing high in big sky – cardinals so bright! Myriad magical fish with a colorful glow; Scuba way down low; look at what coral fish can do. Most playful of animals aquatic – do you know? Burly, gray, and brainy – dolphins clap for you! N/A from July 25, 2020 for Emile Pinet 's Lipogram Contest NO E's in the poem!! Now used for the 'STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (17),any form,any theme' Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/7/2020 7:14:00 PM
an imagist' feast. Thanks
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Date: 8/6/2020 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute one with your lizards, parrots and magical fish. As a kid I wanted 2 dolphins for pets. Enjoy your win and day.....................
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Date: 8/5/2020 11:10:00 PM
Extremely deservedly earned weeeeeen! Impressive lines, Andrea. Your poem has a rich, alive essence. Reader can hear the screeching, buzz, alertness of pictured critters.
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Date: 8/5/2020 7:31:00 PM
Lovely....congratulations on your win Andrea.
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Date: 8/5/2020 5:08:00 PM
Loved it Andrea congrats on your top win!:)
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Date: 8/5/2020 3:46:00 PM
Second time is a charm, my friend. Congratulations on receiving a win for this stunning poetry ~ John
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/5/2020 3:54:00 PM
yayyyy! (and thanks again for your help spotting my e that one time)
Date: 7/26/2020 4:27:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm only saying this because you asked, but I spotted an 'E' in the word 'like', line 6. Otherwise E-less. There may still be time to revise. Wonderful write, with rhymes and all. Best wishes in the contest. ~ John
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/26/2020 4:41:00 PM
I can't believe it. I tried SO hard to spot e's!! Well, I can't take it out and re-enter it but hopefully he has not judged yet. Otherwise, I am doomed.
Date: 7/25/2020 4:19:00 PM
I haven't even tried this one! You have done really well with it. Very descriptive piece, Andrea. Janice
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Date: 7/25/2020 4:07:00 PM
e's e 4 u
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Date: 7/25/2020 3:37:00 PM
Well done! (I need my e's). Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/25/2020 11:44:00 AM
well done, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 7/25/2020 10:57:00 AM
Oh wow, you did great here.. love the fist line, the alliteration is great... this one should do well.. hope you are well..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/25/2020 4:08:00 PM
thanks, feeling same o same o with the prolia side effects . Other than that, doing fine!

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