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Of Bloodless Thorn

So did the poet write on fading dawns words to float across the pond as swans white stanza a-dance against blue sky ivory wings defy the wind and fly. Dewdrop diamonds hung among tall brush eerie voices whispering in dusk’s hush scribble truth upon the shapeless mist inviting passersby to listening‘s tryst. Sunset’s solemn setting set ablaze a look, a touch, a kiss become a craze soft moons adrift across an age painted words upon an unread page. Darkness cannot obscure this light left dormant on the shelves of night yellowed corners of crumpled dawn await silent prick of bloodless thorn. ©4/9/2018 submitted to – New Poems Only – Poetry Contest sponsor – Emile Pinet

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Date: 4/18/2018 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem, a beautiful picture painted with words. I enjoyed reading.
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Date: 4/16/2018 1:54:00 PM
Lovely imagery, John. Congrats on your well deserved silver medal win.
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John Lawless
Date: 4/16/2018 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Line.
Date: 4/16/2018 11:26:00 AM
Excellent use of alliteration, John, congratulations on your win!!!!! Hugs Eve
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John Lawless
Date: 4/16/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Eve,
Date: 4/16/2018 11:07:00 AM
So metaphorically beautiful, John. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 4/16/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, I often wonder how many great poems are written on the wind and scattered before confined to the page.
Date: 4/16/2018 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations John! Your amazing poem has placed second in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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John Lawless
Date: 4/16/2018 3:57:00 PM
Honored my friend, a simple, straightforward contest, thank you
Date: 4/13/2018 9:12:00 AM
I love this, John! "Sunset’s solemn setting set ablaze a look, a touch, a kiss become a craze" Very nice.
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John Lawless
Date: 4/16/2018 8:27:00 AM
thanks Becca, nice to hear from you.
Date: 4/12/2018 7:16:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful John and I love your use of alliteration, i think Emile will have a tough time judging this contest:-) adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 4/12/2018 7:32:00 AM
Hey Jan, nice to hear from you this morning. I had just finished touching up this poem when I checked for new contests. Hope you have a great day.

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