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Of An Ant Floats By Rain

We hear voices of human		
                                   their's happiness, sorrow and pain			
			
                                  have no time to hear heart-rending cry			
                                          of an ant floats by rain

introspectionnaturei do not know?

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 8, 2011 at 1:55 PM

I like the image of that ant floating by, bl-- it depicts so much hope and shows that we must respect life, no matter how small... btw hope this helps--- I believe that should be "heart" and in your 2nd line "there's" -- just want to help-- thanks for sharing this

Bl Devnath

December 9, 2011 at 7:37 AM

Thanks my friend, for showing the casual mistakes done by me in this poem, loved, bl

Andrea Dietrich

December 5, 2011 at 8:46 PM

Yes, even the lowliest of creatures have spirits. Are you from INdia? My best friend in junior high was from India and I remember her dad yelled at me when he saw me outside stepping on ants. I still kill really annoying insects but I can understand now that we don't need to kill them unnecessarily!

Bl Devnath

December 6, 2011 at 2:32 AM

Thanks my friend for your nice comment. I agree with you here. bl

Black Eyed Susan

December 5, 2011 at 7:23 AM

oh so true! i wonder what kind of noise they make, what it sounds like. now you've got me feeling sorry for those pesky critters! (p.s. "there's" and "heart")

Bl Devnath

December 5, 2011 at 7:48 AM

Thanks for your comment, my friend. bl

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