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Of An Ant Floats By Rain

We hear voices of human their's happiness, sorrow and pain have no time to hear heart-rending cry of an ant floats by rain

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/8/2011 1:55:00 PM

I like the image of that ant floating by, bl-- it depicts so much hope and shows that we must respect life, no matter how small... btw hope this helps--- I believe that should be "heart" and in your 2nd line "there's" -- just want to help-- thanks for sharing this

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/9/2011 7:37:00 AM

Thanks my friend, for showing the casual mistakes done by me in this poem, loved, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2011 8:46:00 PM

Yes, even the lowliest of creatures have spirits. Are you from INdia? My best friend in junior high was from India and I remember her dad yelled at me when he saw me outside stepping on ants. I still kill really annoying insects but I can understand now that we don't need to kill them unnecessarily!

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/6/2011 2:32:00 AM

Thanks my friend for your nice comment. I agree with you here. bl

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 12/5/2011 7:23:00 AM

oh so true! i wonder what kind of noise they make, what it sounds like. now you've got me feeling sorry for those pesky critters! (p.s. "there's" and "heart")

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/5/2011 7:48:00 AM

Thanks for your comment, my friend. bl