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Within the velvet smoothness of eventide , Stardust explodes like glittering rhinestones Lustrous as tinsels from a mystic world above Expansive at will through its natural pulse. How this celestial realm—from my mind’s lens-- Allows me to imagine Little and Big Dipper await Their flight across a zigzag of infinite suns, unnamed By life's harbinger: That in the flint of moonlight-- All I could offer is my promise of soul- journey ‘s lasting exploration. - Contest of Brian Strand, A Favoured Theme

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Date: 7/16/2019 2:22:00 PM
Oh Nette, this poem is gorgeous! So deserving of its first placement! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Date: 7/12/2019 3:35:00 PM
It is amazing how the simple pleasure of star gazing can bring us so much wonder... I really enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this afternoon. Stellar work Nette!
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Date: 7/12/2019 8:20:00 AM
Such a beautiful imagery, Nette... Thanks for sharing this wonderful write... Reads like a winner...
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Date: 7/7/2019 11:49:00 AM
This is so different to the other entries and really mystical - Nette best wishes for a win! Hugs and blessings, Jenn.
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Date: 7/6/2019 12:02:00 PM
You took me to dark skies looking up at the millions off diamonds strewn across a cloth of black velvet. Well written nette. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 7/6/2019 11:55:00 AM
Hi nette: The universe is the future harbinger that in time we will explore as our Earth diminishes Beautifully done!
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Date: 7/6/2019 11:35:00 AM
Your world is a stage. Outstanding masterpiece!
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Date: 7/6/2019 8:05:00 AM
I wonder...would we ever be able to see it with our eyes...Lovely write nette...
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