Odin's Army

I fell in battle, sword in hand, 
Invading someone else’s land.
Then I saw her, and she reached down, 
To escort me from the battleground.
I’d let her take me anywhere, 
With her winged helmet and braided hair.

She had me stand ‘neath Odin’s throne, 
Where each warrior must stand alone.
One-eyed Odin judged me to be 
Worthy to serve in his last army….
Daily killed and resurrected--
(Not quite the afterlife expected!)

Samurais taught me to sword-fight.	 
I learned spear and shield from a Hoplite.	
Vikings taught me the battle axe, 
And the Persians taught me sneak attacks.
We die each day and then come back, 
Always practicing for Ragnorak.

She brings me mead, my Valkyrie, 
And sometimes at night she favors me.
Since she’s nearby, it’s just as well--
This isn’t Heaven, but not quite Hell.
We’ll fight and sing to the war drums, 
Waiting the day that Ragnorak comes.


(Chorus)
Our days are spent in miseries, 
But at night we have the Valkyries.
Riposte and lunge, thrust and parry; 
That’s all we do in Odin’s army.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 1:34 PM
Wonderful win Mark ~SKAT~
Halliday Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 11:07 AM
Thanks. You might also like my Till Ragnorak Comes.
A   Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 1:00 PM
MARK, Congratulations on your win. Awesome theme "Gods and Devil." Enjoy your day. Linda
Halliday Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 11:07 AM
Thanks. You might also like Till Ragnorak Comes.
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Norse mythology...o exciting Thrilled by 'She brings me mead, my Valkyrie, And sometimes at night she favors me. Since she’s nearby, it’s just as well-----' The way you use the mythical personages is really deserve commendation. A 7+++. Congrats.
Halliday Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 11:09 AM
Thanks. You might also like Till Ragnorak Comes. It has a similar theme but from a modern mortal's perspective.
Kayode Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 9:25 PM
Congrats Mark...huggs
Halliday Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 11:10 AM
Thanks. You might also like Till Ragnorak Comes.
Allison Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 1:12 PM
Many congrats on your win Mark:-) Hugs Jan xx
Halliday Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 11:11 AM
Thanks. You might also like Till Ragnorak Comes.
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Mark, , EPIC WRITE, EPIC WIN.... CONGRATS... LUV ~LINDA
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 10:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest, Mark
Halliday Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Thanks. This is one I recycled from a few years ago. I did a similar one called Till Ragnorak Comes.
A  Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 7:13 PM
MARK, Congrats---- thank you for supporting my "Diamond Dust, Devil" contest. Love ~SKAT~
Lindley Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 9:58 AM
I love all things Viking . Truly enjoyed this great write. She had me stand ‘neath Odin’s throne, Where each warrior must stand alone. One-eyed Odin judged me to be Worthy to serve in his last army…. Daily killed and resurrected-- (Not quite the afterlife expected!) Brilliant!!
Halliday Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 12:14 PM
Thanks. I really like the line about the unexpected afterlife, too.
Halliday Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 4:00 PM
Thanks for commenting. I have a similar one called Till Ragnorak Comes, which addresses the same topic but from the perspective of a recently fallen soldier that gets dragged up to Valhalla.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Reminds me of the historical drama series VIKINGS which I love. Thank you for transporting me to another place and time. Bravo!
Halliday Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 11:06 AM
Sorry for the late reply. You also might like Till Ragnorak Comes.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 5:57 PM
I am a fan of Lord of the Rings so I very much enjoy your tale.
Halliday Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Sorry for the late reply. You might also like Till Ragnorak Comes.
Walker  Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 2:42 AM
You are in a writer's mood, it seems Mark... Well done. Verlena :)s
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