Notes About The Poem
This a song I wrote to a French girl I was in like with back in 1983.  She lived in a tall student apartment building--the tower.  She indirectly got me into writing poetry.

Odessey

Where
To find the road to you
The road that leads me home
The home that finds me in your arms again

How
To see my journey through
The journey where I roam
I roam the world in search for you 'til then

Till then I'll seek
The image in my mind
The dream that still yet breathes
The heart that beats
The eyes after her her kind
Then
I'll face the rising sun
The sun that brings new life
A life for us to share as one again

What
Must I do to prove true
True to the quest I hold
A quest un-vowed, but binding to my heart

When
The day that I'll find you
Find you in my arms, hold
Hold you in my arms, never more to part

To part ones past
Erase the moments lost
Replaced with memories shared
Which don't exist
The past is just a ghost
Part
A mistake once past made
Made then without a choice
The choice that split the two halves of our heart

Why
This odessey to seek
To seek the way to to you
To you who are just memories in my mind

Be
It possible to speak
To speak again to to you
To you for whom I'd give my life to find

How
To see my journey through
The journey where I roam
I roam the world in search for you 'til then

Where
To find the road to you
The road that leads me home
The home that finds me in your arms again

In your arms again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 10:07 PM
Great win my friend, congrats!!
Halliday Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 11:25 PM
Thanks Robert. This is one of my lost works from back in the 80s.
A  Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:21 PM
Mark, this happens to be one of my favorites on this winning list so far..... SKAT
Halliday Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 11:24 PM
Thank you. This was something I composed on piano for a songwriting class. It is ironic, because I've played piano for 40 years or so, but most of my songs were composed to guitar. It has a haunting winding melody.
Mehta Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:08 AM
It's a nice take on the theme of the contest. Congrats on the win, Mark
Halliday Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 9:34 AM
I liked your piece too, but didn't understand part of it. What did you mean by 'line' as used in these two phrases? My destination was not hell so why I line Of course, it was heaven why line again.
Deschler Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 8:04 PM
A great lyrical expression of trying to find your way down the right road. Well done, Mark! Congrats on your win!
Halliday Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 11:12 PM
Thanks. I actually wrote this song probably in the late 1980s. I think I did it for a song-writing class, where I sang it while playing it on the piano. It fit the theme, so I resurrected it.
Devnath  Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 2:00 PM
Very nice poem enjoyed filled with heartfelt words. Loved always, my friend, bl
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