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Ode To the Granite Boulder In Lake Superior

...upon emerging from the fury of swimming just a few feet out in the Grand Old Lady Boldly upright in surf Fog races in and cloaks her surface Alive! I grip the bottom for the crush As waves crash my glistening face Freedom has found me! 01/19/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/22/2014 7:35:00 PM
careful with those waves.
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Date: 1/20/2014 7:58:00 AM
This makes me feel refreshed.
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Date: 1/19/2014 1:50:00 PM
Had me thinking of the people who ride the surf. I am afraid of water so you would not catch me riding the waves or on the water if possible. Nicely done on this poem Jimbo. love phyl
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Date: 1/19/2014 11:34:00 AM
this is awesome, What a ride!!!
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Date: 1/19/2014 9:19:00 AM
I'd LOVE LOVE LOVE to feel this for real, right now. What an invigorating writing!!!
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