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Ode To Sun

Oh Sun! you are an inspiration to me
Your presence fills me with glee
Punctual, hardworking, egoless and calm
I bow unto you, joining my palm

You make my days bright
End darkness that gives fright
Your warmth caresses me
In every ray, bountiful love I see

You paint the sky in varied hues
Give me daily beautiful views
You are the cause of creation
In your absence there'll be starvation

Your beauty and light ends my strife
Without you I cannot imagine life

Oh sun! I love you, so much you do

19.08.2021
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Date: 8/20/2021 6:20:00 AM
It conquers the darkness and helps things to grow, feeling the Suns warmth is bliss. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 8/19/2021 11:43:00 AM
Hello Rama, yes the sun is beautiful. It gives us heat and hot humid weather on those summer days. it is gives us light in the morning and afternoons Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2021 11:06:00 AM
You are welcome my friend. blessings.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/19/2021 4:16:00 PM
You ar3 welcome my friend. Blessings.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/19/2021 11:46:00 AM
Thanks. Now are you? Take care, God bless!
Date: 8/19/2021 8:30:00 AM
Your poems spring from your heart. This makes them very personal. This, like other poems, has plenty of feeling in it. How are you?
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/19/2021 11:45:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 8/18/2021 11:49:00 PM
Beautiful Ode... It keeps on shining to make us live...
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/19/2021 11:45:00 AM
Thanks

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