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Ode To Summer

...for jhl


shimmering thermals
rise like the unleashed phoenix
summer storm has fled

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Chris Roe

September 12, 2009 at 6:57 PM

Brilliant! i have been reading through your poetry and i truly enjoy it.

Karla Null

August 30, 2009 at 10:19 PM

I do like, that was sweet but not necessary.....Karla

Carrie Richards

August 30, 2009 at 8:40 AM

Another wonderful haiku!! lovely work! ~ Carrie

James Peranteau

August 30, 2009 at 8:03 AM

Great Haiku Mr. Goff,...Oh please Oh please ,....bring on the cold,...sorry heat fans,..I'm a polar bear ! *smiles* TY for this one Sir ! james

Brian Strand

August 30, 2009 at 12:59 AM

Like that last line Jim.Nice one Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Raul Moreno

August 29, 2009 at 11:58 PM

Nice work James, loved the ode...Raul

Charmaine Chircop

August 29, 2009 at 10:57 PM

this is so true---i had an August full of heatwaves.......but summerstroms flied away and w e re waiting for some rain:)excelllent Ode.......bravo --charma

Karla Null

August 29, 2009 at 10:11 PM

Most definately in the air. I posted one also (8-19-09). It was so hot that day, I knew what was coming. Today was 70 degrees. Good one James....Karla