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Ode To Summer

...for jhl shimmering thermals rise like the unleashed phoenix summer storm has fled

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Chris Roe

Date: 9/12/2009 6:57:00 PM

Brilliant! i have been reading through your poetry and i truly enjoy it.

Karla Null

Date: 8/30/2009 10:19:00 PM

I do like, that was sweet but not necessary.....Karla

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/30/2009 8:40:00 AM

Another wonderful haiku!! lovely work! ~ Carrie

James Peranteau

Date: 8/30/2009 8:03:00 AM

Great Haiku Mr. Goff,...Oh please Oh please ,....bring on the cold,...sorry heat fans,..I'm a polar bear ! *smiles* TY for this one Sir ! james

Brian Strand

Date: 8/30/2009 12:59:00 AM

Like that last line Jim.Nice one Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Raul Moreno

Date: 8/29/2009 11:58:00 PM

Nice work James, loved the ode...Raul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/29/2009 10:57:00 PM

this is so true---i had an August full of heatwaves.......but summerstroms flied away and w e re waiting for some rain:)excelllent Ode.......bravo --charma

Karla Null

Date: 8/29/2009 10:11:00 PM

Most definately in the air. I posted one also (8-19-09). It was so hot that day, I knew what was coming. Today was 70 degrees. Good one James....Karla

James Knox

Date: 8/29/2009 10:09:00 PM

summer put to words .... excellent description!!! :)

Karla Null

Date: 8/29/2009 10:08:00 PM

Most definately in the air I posted one also (8-19-09). It was so hot I knew what was coming, today was 70! Good one James

Sue Mason

Date: 8/29/2009 8:37:00 PM

I just posted a change of the season haiku too ... must be in the air ... smile ... great imagery here, James !!