Ode To Spring

Through a fluttering veil of luscious hues,
Fair Lady coquets with the majestic Sun,
As the wicked Wind caresses her tender cheek,
The harshness of Winter all undone.

Sparrows perched upon the towering trees,
Whistle sweetly at the colorful array.
Fair Lady hums and sways in warm ecstasy,
As the wicked Wind drifts away.

The sinful Sun glows after a wearying day,
And spans its gaze upon the fields of fruit.
Fair Lady drowsy, lies upon the prickly grass;
The darkness envelops as all goes mute.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 20, 2010 at 4:09 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Deepanshi! Dan C
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December 20, 2010 at 8:56 AM
Congratulations Deepanshi on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
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December 1, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Congratulations on your win in the big contest...Sara
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November 25, 2010 at 2:15 PM
Hi Deepanshi.This is a beautiful piece of poetry.I love your descriptive imagery.Your words flow softly with a gentle rhythm.Nice and soothing.A joy to read Congratulations on being placed in the P.S. contest.Love June(Sylvia)
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November 25, 2010 at 3:24 AM
Deepanshi - Many congrats on winning coveted spot in contest..... Happy Thanksgiving.... Luv & Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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November 24, 2010 at 4:29 AM
Hey warmest congrats to you on having your wonderful poem winning the Poetry Soup international Contest. keep your passionate pen flowing with inspiration and keep up the creative writes. You are such a wonderful talent. Keep writing. Love always. Adeleke.
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November 23, 2010 at 5:50 PM
Deligthful metaphor in this poetry. I really enjoyed this. Congratulations to you. Luv, Andrea
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November 23, 2010 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations on your win in the PS Intl. Contest, Deepanshi! Love, Audrey
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November 23, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations on your win Deepanshi in The PoetrySoup International Contest with your amazing poetry. Love, Carol
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November 22, 2010 at 10:14 PM
Warmest congratulations, loved your poem it made for a great read, Anna-Marie.
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November 22, 2010 at 9:55 PM
Congrats for being among the winners, Cheers i take inspiration from you cheers suresh
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November 13, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Congratulations on you going on into the second round in the soup contest..Sara
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November 10, 2010 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Deepanshi. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 25, 2010 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Deepanshi. Love, Carol
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June 10, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3
Slaughter Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 10:49 PM
I really loved reading this poem! It was very nicely written!
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June 4, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Enjoyed reading today, very professional write--well done!!
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June 4, 2010 at 12:51 PM
Good use of rhyme and imagery for a creative view. You paint a picture with words in this poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comments. Keep on writing! Karen
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June 4, 2010 at 10:49 AM
very well done enjoyed your feature poem. Thank you so much for the comment. I will get back on this one. Sound real interesting,..p.d.
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February 23, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Well done my friend... Keep up all the good work....:JP]
Palli Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 5:41 AM
Beautiful!
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