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Ode To Miss Charlotte

Ode to Miss Charlotte I read about some verbal wars That brew among some poets. It’s fought between the ‘know-it-alls’ And those who just don’t know it. I came upon your essay On this sacred hallowed site And after reading what you said I am convinced you’re right. Man, in his poetry must apply Some elementary rules Lest those who seek our legacy Will think we all were fools. Who makes the rules by which we write May always tease our minds But poets’ hearts will always be The source of all we leave behind. Haikus are a special breed But we’ve known all along That Japanese write differently Yet sing their haunting songs. So, let life stand and judge me As I travel the poets’ road While I’ve not only butchered haikus, I have devastated odes. Author’s note: Listed below are some of my posts that will clarify some confusion.. Jake On Raisin’ Haikus, Haiku Hell, Haiku Shoppe, Haiku Town Dog, Haikuville, Haiku Hash, Haiku Omelet (1 and 2), Haiku Hound Written by: John Posey 10/05/13 Inspired by: Haiku Fanatics, a poem by Charlotte Puddifoot

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Thomas Carney

Date: 11/29/2014 7:43:00 AM

Okay, now I understand better the reason for your absence Jack. You have done the right thing obviously, but you are missed. Be safe and well, and God's healing to your wife and His abundant love to both of you. Your poem; I don't know all that went down, but sometime one has to make a point, and you did it in classy fashion, well written sir. Thomas

Diana Burkholder

Date: 7/28/2014 11:51:00 AM

Like the rhythm of this one and the self depreciating musing at the end. :-)

John Posey
Date: 7/29/2014 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Diana.... This was meant to be a fun writ3.... Glad you enjoyed it...... I do write some serious verses.....You might like "Songwriter's Sonnet"..... Love ya...... Jake

Carol Eastman

Date: 5/31/2014 10:56:00 AM

Loved the poem... But I won't judge... just enjoy your work...

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 5/26/2014 12:37:00 PM

I hope the wifey is recuperating fine. My prayers are with you both.

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 5/26/2014 9:06:00 AM

Hi John, missed reading from you.

John Posey
Date: 5/26/2014 12:38:00 PM

Richard, my friend, I appreciate your concern....I am feeling stronger and hope to be posting again soon. Thanks.... Jake

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 5/26/2014 12:35:00 PM

I want to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks for your encouraging comments placed on my poems my friend. I would be deleting my works from the Soup gradually. So I just want to express my thanks for your kind support since I've been here. But I would definitely be stopping by to read your new works....after all I'm still your fan....Mustapha

John Posey
Date: 5/26/2014 12:29:00 PM

Thanks, my friend. I'm getting back in shape and ready to begin posting again. Recent setback due to wife's being hospitalized has altered my schedule.. Thanks for your concern...... Jake

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/25/2014 8:20:00 AM

Good Morning John, I hope all is well. It has been a long time since you have posted.

Brooke Dylan

Date: 5/13/2014 3:28:00 PM

Joh I feel the same way.... I write how I feel and I don't care about rhyming .. I don't understand free verse.. I just write.. I write for me... I love your poetry... it makes sense to me hus Brooke

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 5/13/2014 2:40:00 PM

I enjoyed this well-written poem. Great read.

Kj Force

Date: 5/13/2014 1:20:00 PM

Kudos...as a Poet, I have always written of what and how I think. There are those that will understand and relate and those who don't will berate....enjoyed..

John Boyle

Date: 5/13/2014 11:28:00 AM

Awesome write... :)

Donna Jones

Date: 3/29/2014 7:50:00 PM

Hey Jake....coming round to say hi and check on ya...looking for a new poem....God bless my friend...

Connie Moore

Date: 3/19/2014 5:14:00 PM

Hi Jake you write with such truth and emotion. A very well written truth. Connie

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/17/2014 11:19:00 AM

Dear Jake. This poem rules!! 7* Inspiration doesn't come with a rule book! You said it and I listened! My best, chuck

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/27/2014 8:32:00 AM

I like this Ode, I also appreciate your humor.

Funom Makama

Date: 1/24/2014 4:19:00 PM

What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/14/2014 6:10:00 AM

A fine Ode and congratulations on the win, John

Skat A

Date: 1/13/2014 2:24:00 PM

JOHN, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 1/4/2014 9:08:00 AM

Nice poem

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2013 1:33:00 AM

oh, and wanted to wish you a speedy recovery. My sister is having that same surgery that you had, but in the new year. I guess my family is prone to knee problems. UGGG. Hope not me. I had a heck of a time with shoulder therapy three years ago and never want to go thru therapy again!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2013 1:32:00 AM

john, I look forward to these new poems that you say you are having ideas for. May your new year be prosperous, especially for poetry!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 3:16:00 AM

John--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Weston Gregory

Date: 11/30/2013 11:17:00 AM

I actually was able to sing the verse very nice

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 11/28/2013 10:50:00 AM

I enjoyed this ode to Charlotte. I checked out her "Haiku Fanatics" and it's fantastic, as is this one. Well done, Jake. Licia :-)

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2013 1:40:00 PM

love this witty write

Donna Jones

Date: 11/8/2013 9:16:00 PM

Hey Jake...I know I've butchered a few...just love the challenge of few words painting a picture..this is a great write here...inspired by a nice lady....:-) :-) :-)