Ode To Miss Charlotte

Ode to Miss Charlotte

I read about some verbal wars
That brew among some poets.
It’s fought between the ‘know-it-alls’
And those who just don’t know it.

I came upon your essay
On this sacred hallowed site
And after reading what you said
I am convinced you’re right.

Man, in his poetry must apply
 Some elementary rules
Lest those who seek our legacy
Will think we all were fools.

Who makes the rules by which we write
May always tease our minds
But poets’ hearts will always be
The source of all we leave behind.

Haikus are a special breed
But we’ve known all along
That Japanese write differently
Yet sing their haunting songs.

So, let life stand and judge me 
As I travel the poets’ road
While I’ve not only butchered haikus,
I have devastated odes.

Author’s note: Listed below are some of my posts that will clarify some confusion.. Jake
On Raisin’ Haikus, Haiku Hell, Haiku Shoppe, Haiku Town Dog, Haikuville, Haiku Hash, Haiku Omelet (1 and 2), Haiku Hound


Written by: John Posey 10/05/13
Inspired by: Haiku Fanatics, a poem by Charlotte Puddifoot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/29/2014 7:43:00 AM
Okay, now I understand better the reason for your absence Jack. You have done the right thing obviously, but you are missed. Be safe and well, and God's healing to your wife and His abundant love to both of you. Your poem; I don't know all that went down, but sometime one has to make a point, and you did it in classy fashion, well written sir. Thomas
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Date: 7/28/2014 11:51:00 AM
Like the rhythm of this one and the self depreciating musing at the end. :-)
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Date: 7/29/2014 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Diana.... This was meant to be a fun writ3.... Glad you enjoyed it...... I do write some serious verses.....You might like "Songwriter's Sonnet"..... Love ya...... Jake
Date: 5/31/2014 10:56:00 AM
Loved the poem... But I won't judge... just enjoy your work...
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Date: 5/26/2014 12:37:00 PM
I hope the wifey is recuperating fine. My prayers are with you both.
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Date: 5/26/2014 9:06:00 AM
Hi John, missed reading from you.
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John Posey
Date: 5/26/2014 12:38:00 PM
Richard, my friend, I appreciate your concern....I am feeling stronger and hope to be posting again soon. Thanks.... Jake
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 5/26/2014 12:35:00 PM
I want to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks for your encouraging comments placed on my poems my friend. I would be deleting my works from the Soup gradually. So I just want to express my thanks for your kind support since I've been here. But I would definitely be stopping by to read your new works....after all I'm still your fan....Mustapha
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John Posey
Date: 5/26/2014 12:29:00 PM
Thanks, my friend. I'm getting back in shape and ready to begin posting again. Recent setback due to wife's being hospitalized has altered my schedule.. Thanks for your concern...... Jake
Date: 5/25/2014 8:20:00 AM
Good Morning John, I hope all is well. It has been a long time since you have posted.
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Date: 5/13/2014 3:28:00 PM
Joh I feel the same way.... I write how I feel and I don't care about rhyming .. I don't understand free verse.. I just write.. I write for me... I love your poetry... it makes sense to me hus Brooke
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Date: 5/13/2014 2:40:00 PM
I enjoyed this well-written poem. Great read.
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:20:00 PM
Kudos...as a Poet, I have always written of what and how I think. There are those that will understand and relate and those who don't will berate....enjoyed..
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Date: 5/13/2014 11:28:00 AM
Awesome write... :)
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Date: 3/29/2014 7:50:00 PM
Hey Jake....coming round to say hi and check on ya...looking for a new poem....God bless my friend...
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Date: 3/19/2014 5:14:00 PM
Hi Jake you write with such truth and emotion. A very well written truth. Connie
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Date: 2/17/2014 11:19:00 AM
Dear Jake. This poem rules!! 7* Inspiration doesn't come with a rule book! You said it and I listened! My best, chuck
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:32:00 AM
I like this Ode, I also appreciate your humor.
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Date: 1/24/2014 4:19:00 PM
What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.
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Date: 1/14/2014 6:10:00 AM
A fine Ode and congratulations on the win, John
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Date: 1/13/2014 2:24:00 PM
JOHN, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 1/4/2014 9:08:00 AM
Nice poem
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Date: 12/25/2013 1:33:00 AM
oh, and wanted to wish you a speedy recovery. My sister is having that same surgery that you had, but in the new year. I guess my family is prone to knee problems. UGGG. Hope not me. I had a heck of a time with shoulder therapy three years ago and never want to go thru therapy again!!
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Date: 12/25/2013 1:32:00 AM
john, I look forward to these new poems that you say you are having ideas for. May your new year be prosperous, especially for poetry!!
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Date: 12/24/2013 3:16:00 AM
John--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 11/30/2013 11:17:00 AM
I actually was able to sing the verse very nice
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Date: 11/28/2013 10:50:00 AM
I enjoyed this ode to Charlotte. I checked out her "Haiku Fanatics" and it's fantastic, as is this one. Well done, Jake. Licia :-)
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Date: 11/10/2013 1:40:00 PM
love this witty write
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Date: 11/8/2013 9:16:00 PM
Hey Jake...I know I've butchered a few...just love the challenge of few words painting a picture..this is a great write here...inspired by a nice lady....:-) :-) :-)
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