John Posey Poet Rhyme

Ode To Miss Charlotte

Ode to Miss Charlotte

I read about some verbal wars
That brew among some poets.
It’s fought between the ‘know-it-alls’
And those who just don’t know it.

I came upon your essay
On this sacred hallowed site
And after reading what you said
I am convinced you’re right.

Man, in his poetry must apply
 Some elementary rules
Lest those who seek our legacy
Will think we all were fools.

Who makes the rules by which we write
May always tease our minds
But poets’ hearts will always be
The source of all we leave behind.

Haikus are a special breed
But we’ve known all along
That Japanese write differently
Yet sing their haunting songs.

So, let life stand and judge me 
As I travel the poets’ road
While I’ve not only butchered haikus,
I have devastated odes.

Author’s note: Listed below are some of my posts that will clarify some confusion.. Jake
On Raisin’ Haikus, Haiku Hell, Haiku Shoppe, Haiku Town Dog, Haikuville, Haiku Hash, Haiku Omelet (1 and 2), Haiku Hound


Written by: John Posey 10/05/13
Inspired by: Haiku Fanatics, a poem by Charlotte Puddifoot

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Thomas Carney November 29, 2014 at 7:43 AM Okay, now I understand better the reason for your absence Jack. You have done the right thing obviously, but you are missed. Be safe and well, and God's healing to your wife and His abundant love to both of you. Your poem; I don't know all that went down, but sometime one has to make a point, and you did it in classy fashion, well written sir. Thomas

Diana Burkholder July 28, 2014 at 11:51 AM Like the rhythm of this one and the self depreciating musing at the end. :-) John Posey July 29, 2014 at 10:44 AM Thanks Diana.... This was meant to be a fun writ3.... Glad you enjoyed it...... I do write some serious verses.....You might like "Songwriter's Sonnet"..... Love ya...... Jake

Carol Eastman May 31, 2014 at 10:56 AM Loved the poem... But I won't judge... just enjoy your work...

Mustapha Mohammed May 26, 2014 at 12:37 PM I hope the wifey is recuperating fine. My prayers are with you both.

Mustapha Mohammed May 26, 2014 at 9:06 AM Hi John, missed reading from you. John Posey May 26, 2014 at 12:38 PM Richard, my friend, I appreciate your concern....I am feeling stronger and hope to be posting again soon. Thanks.... Jake Mustapha Mohammed May 26, 2014 at 12:35 PM I want to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks for your encouraging comments placed on my poems my friend. I would be deleting my works from the Soup gradually. So I just want to express my thanks for your kind support since I've been here. But I would definitely be stopping by to read your new works....after all I'm still your fan....Mustapha John Posey May 26, 2014 at 12:29 PM Thanks, my friend. I'm getting back in shape and ready to begin posting again. Recent setback due to wife's being hospitalized has altered my schedule.. Thanks for your concern...... Jake

Richard Lamoureux May 25, 2014 at 8:20 AM Good Morning John, I hope all is well. It has been a long time since you have posted.

Brooke Dylan May 13, 2014 at 3:28 PM Joh I feel the same way.... I write how I feel and I don't care about rhyming .. I don't understand free verse.. I just write.. I write for me... I love your poetry... it makes sense to me hus Brooke

Ndaba Sibanda May 13, 2014 at 2:40 PM I enjoyed this well-written poem. Great read.

Kj Force May 13, 2014 at 1:20 PM Kudos...as a Poet, I have always written of what and how I think. There are those that will understand and relate and those who don't will berate....enjoyed..

John Boyle May 13, 2014 at 11:28 AM Awesome write... :)

Donna Jones March 29, 2014 at 7:50 PM Hey Jake....coming round to say hi and check on ya...looking for a new poem....God bless my friend...

Connie Moore March 19, 2014 at 5:14 PM Hi Jake you write with such truth and emotion. A very well written truth. Connie

Chuck Melugin February 17, 2014 at 11:19 AM Dear Jake. This poem rules!! 7* Inspiration doesn't come with a rule book! You said it and I listened! My best, chuck

Richard Lamoureux January 27, 2014 at 8:32 AM I like this Ode, I also appreciate your humor.

Funom Makama January 24, 2014 at 4:19 PM What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 14, 2014 at 6:10 AM A fine Ode and congratulations on the win, John

Skat A January 13, 2014 at 2:24 PM JOHN, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs January 4, 2014 at 9:08 AM Nice poem

Andrea Dietrich December 25, 2013 at 1:33 AM oh, and wanted to wish you a speedy recovery. My sister is having that same surgery that you had, but in the new year. I guess my family is prone to knee problems. UGGG. Hope not me. I had a heck of a time with shoulder therapy three years ago and never want to go thru therapy again!!

Andrea Dietrich December 25, 2013 at 1:32 AM john, I look forward to these new poems that you say you are having ideas for. May your new year be prosperous, especially for poetry!!

Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2013 at 3:16 AM John--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Weston Gregory November 30, 2013 at 11:17 AM I actually was able to sing the verse very nice

Delysia Hendricks November 28, 2013 at 10:50 AM I enjoyed this ode to Charlotte. I checked out her "Haiku Fanatics" and it's fantastic, as is this one. Well done, Jake. Licia :-)

Jack Horne November 10, 2013 at 1:40 PM love this witty write

Donna Jones November 8, 2013 at 9:16 PM Hey Jake...I know I've butchered a few...just love the challenge of few words painting a picture..this is a great write here...inspired by a nice lady....:-) :-) :-)

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