Ode To Aunt Verna

Aunt Verna  really loved my benign timbre, the way I cuddled words as they came out.
Treasure troves unlocked with mystic reverence, would add a little sunshine for awhile.
How cleverly I sculpted rustic idylls as I spoke,
the warmth with which I told of beech wood log fires,
old breakfast fare beloved by homely folk I’d neatly sketch,
those settings I portrayed with just a tone.
Horizons from afar and wondrous lands, journeys from the centre of the earth, rainbow clouds I planted in her heart  were warmly welcomed.
That kindly face transformed itself when taking in my  poems about the sea.
She loved when salted yarns infused an image, the frothy waves and reckless storms engulfing it.
Those oceanic eyes of my dear auntie, always revelled in the surge of every sonnet, as they surfed the silver tides with magic flair.
An epic verse would have this woman mesmerized,
some April breeze would prompt a tender smile,
a butterfly bewildered  would do likewise.
Spring colours could be readily restored, each time I had the privilege or chance, of transporting someone precious to an earlier enchantment,
to that time perhaps when life had just begun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 4:41 AM
Yes, it must have been nice to have an aunt to encouraged you in such a way to help you keep on using your skills and develop them so much more. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 5:12 AM
Many thanks indeed for your observations on this and my other works. Encouragement is vital with helpful critiques. I love your visits, Howard
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 1:57 PM
Wow that was quite the aunt you had. I have a sister who used to really treasure my poems but not so much any more. And older neighbor friend and one aunt if mine really liked my poems too. It's so difficult to find such people in our lives. I really liked when you described her with oceanic eyes related to your tales of the sea
Ermine Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 2:27 AM
Marvellous scene setting. Beyond fantastic expression. I'm in shock, after reading a couple of your sorties, you are a hugely talented writer of longer forms.
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