Ode To An Oncoming Spring

Few hearts now weep to see you go
O cold harsh naked winter
The last icy tremor of your merciless winds
Fizzling through the choked air
Leaves it's thinning  threads in
The oncoming fairyland of Spring.
Winter have you gone, answer me?
A refreshing winter you have been
But how we have longed for your departure
Away away and bury yourself, O harsh east wind
Go now, your season is over
Snatch off your furred coating
And bid welcome -
To a bursting singing Spring.
Welcome, welcome, first lady of creation
Your sweet scented grass sheds tears of dew
Tears of elation, as morning peeps.
As foetal clouds now bathe us
In your new re-birth
Winter threads it's skeleton hand
With it's new love Spring
And with it a new energy is  born.
Greenery buds with purity and freshness
The orange canopy floods us with her mirth
While the swelling sun in giant splendour
Can no longer conceal
The first flush of Spring.
The world is awakened by it's mighty arrival
The dance of the daffodils is about to begin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Duncan Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 3:07 PM
What a nicely worded poem, for the spring coming thru ;}
Iloduba Jnr Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 3:42 PM
nature knows you by name now. natural work.and its good.
Rider Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 12:17 PM
Wonderful poem for spring! So long anticipated, the rebirth, the awakening, great write! Truely, Trudy
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 4:46 AM
Delightful language and imagery! I like the style of this piece very much... BRAVO Deirdre! Best wishes, Keith
Shango Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 6:15 AM
"The dance of the daffodils is about to begin" What a beautiful imagery, please continue making more.
Guzzi Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 7:47 AM
Another most excellent write great ending! "The dance of the daffodils is about to begin." Can you turn on soup mail? My email is [email protected]. I'd like to speak to you about your nature poems. My web site is empathic-touch.com
Strand Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 1:29 AM
Excellent nature poetry Deirdre Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
P. Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 12:58 AM
O harsh is this winter... you have given rise to a lovely season... with your poem!! i like that the 'first flush of spring'... so beautiful!! bravo... loved this write... ~ Arany
Moreno Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 6:06 PM
The ending is like a turning point to a whole new piece. Great job...Raul
Richards Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 1:02 PM
Wow, Deirdre, what a gorgeous poem!! This is one of the most beautiful poems about the awakening of spring, that I've read ....absolutely beautiful!!! love, Carrie
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