Get Your Premium Membership

Ode To a Gerbil

little gerbil in a cage running your wheel but full of rage hate being locked up all the day waiting for your big escape wondering what it would be like to play in the heat of the sun's rays

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/27/2009 7:05:00 AM
You know that has got to be right or is it. It is the only life he has ever known. Keep writing. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 8/27/2009 5:08:00 AM
Oh the poor little thing. It just doesn't understand the cage is for it's safety. Excellent JB. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 8/27/2009 12:07:00 AM
wondering how beautiful freedom is--well penned--charma
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things