Ode of Rain and Veil

She’s the princess of the world of silence.
Existing outside our normal human touch,
She sees every good, bad, deed we do.
She passes no judgment, just perseverance.
Realizing this world has choice, as such.
Caring not what we decide, or even a clue.
Her soul was guided by plain experience.
Her mind unrivaled, and new very much,
Her name, Rain; with eyes of light blue,
Lips that glimmered, true, effervescence,
Her name was given from her first touch.
Upon the day she was born, it came anew.
Christening with name in natures balance,
Her destiny preordained in gentle touch.
Who would win her heart, capturing dew?
Dew, one of her two faithful acquaintances,
They chatted in a language, Double Dutch.
Mist, the second, now you know of the two.
Stallions, white twins, with no ambivalence,
Only she could speak, hear, revealing crutch.
No other could tell differences in her crew.
One to be her prince in adoring excellence,
Must win confidence of dew in his touch,
No mistake, no second chance for woo.
Many have tried to no avail in adolescence.
Only one pauper’s son left to offer such.
One chance to know, to choose right skew,
His mind, unconsciously knew adherence.
When he prepared his choice, a quick clutch,
His choices correct, all others they bid adieu.
Her companion was chosen, forever attendance.
He rode mist, she road dew, in blissful touch
His heart and soul was, sincere, more than true
Princess and pauper together, rode into silence.
Peace prevailed in their land, never violence.
Princess Rain, now Prince Veil road in balance.



Written for

Sponsor Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ 
Contest Name Rain, The Story 
Written by cecil Hickman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations Cecil on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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January 13, 2011 at 4:23 PM
Congratulations on your win, Cecil. Luv, Andrea
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January 13, 2011 at 1:18 PM
Congratulations on your very creative piece, winning a worthy place in the winner's circle/ Always. Peace, Audrey
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January 13, 2011 at 12:02 PM
A very imaginative write filled with intriguining characters, Cecil. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 6:37 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of constance, cecil
Onclaud Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 3:23 AM
beautifully woven tale!! cheers for bagging a great win in the contest, cecil!! : ) nette
Mehta Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 9:16 PM
Many Congrats Cecil on big win with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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January 12, 2011 at 8:35 PM
Congrats Cecil on your wonderful win in the Rain Story contest with this elegant entry my friend... enjoy a well deserved top notch win with luv..
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December 15, 2010 at 2:13 AM
Thank you Cecil for this beautiful poem.It is like a fairy tale-kashinath
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