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(written for my son's wedding last year)

October brings best wedding time, When couples heart unite sublime, Its colorful hues of hills & trees, Seems like a painting on a piece. On bright sunny wedding epoch, Dancing begins outside the church, Music of drums serenades all, Groom rides Mustang without a fall. Wedding seems like fairy story, Groom stands on the altar tensely, The bride walks the isle like princess, Flower girls sprinkle rose petals. After wedding, its picture time, Couple pose with romantic shine, Everyone gets a snap with pair, Memory to last forever. Dusk sets in near reception hall, Party to dance without a fall, Food, wine, sparklers, enjoy it all, dance till you drop & mingle with all.

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Date: 10/19/2023 3:20:00 PM
Hello Jay Narain, This is a wonderful pom about a wedding. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
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Date: 10/19/2023 11:47:00 AM
Great imagery and a superb poem.
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