Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

October Sun

The October sun beamed down on my face
As the leaves twirled around me, in this place
Shades of blue decorated the sky, above
As I tried to capture a warm glimpse of love
Waiting for me, where trees held color tight
With warm breeze messages sent through the night
Then there it was, up above in my sight
Scrolled by clouds, in wind currents of flight
A splendor of all that I need to know
Wrapped around me, in the sunshine’s glow

Heidi Sands

10/26/19

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Ann Foster November 4, 2019 at 8:43 AM This made me smile and grab my jacket. hehe. Hugs. Ann Heidi Sands November 4, 2019 at 1:48 PM Thank you Ann :)

Caren Krutsinger October 31, 2019 at 6:01 AM Fabulous poem Heidi. Good luck in Line's contest. Heidi Sands November 4, 2019 at 1:48 PM Thank you Caren :)

Chris Green October 28, 2019 at 7:53 AM Absolutely beautiful my friend. A poem of nature and love, what could be better? Best wishes in the contest my friend. Heidi Sands October 28, 2019 at 8:06 AM Hi Chris. That's right, what could be better to write about ? Thank you very much :)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2019 at 6:14 AM - A lovely October sun, Heidi :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong October 27, 2019 at 9:11 PM My Heidi, this poem is so lovely. The sun is appreciated even more when it appears less. This sweet poem is a Fave for me Heidi. I loved it! : ) xxoo

Winged Warrior October 27, 2019 at 12:03 PM WoW!! You are glowing with the October Sun...loved this my poetic sister...sure to place high Heidi...a fav my friend...^WW^ :o) Heidi Sands October 27, 2019 at 2:40 PM Thank you WW. I appreciate your kind comment and support :)

Arturo Michael October 27, 2019 at 7:43 AM A lovely write...Peaceful with much appreciation... Heidi Sands October 27, 2019 at 10:03 AM Thank you Arturo. I appreciate your visit and comment. I hope you enjoy the day :)

Silent One October 27, 2019 at 4:23 AM It has been raining all month... floods in some parts.. but sun is out today.... nice poem.. Heidi Sands October 27, 2019 at 10:03 AM Oh, that sounds like a lot of rain Silent One. I am glad the sun is out for you today. Thank you :)

Demetrios Trifiatis October 27, 2019 at 3:53 AM Celebrating October's glory in a marvelous poetic rapture! Excellent dearest, Heidi! Heidi Sands October 27, 2019 at 10:02 AM Hi Demetrios! Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Kim Rodrigues October 26, 2019 at 9:57 PM Lovely imagery, Heidi, Heidi Sands October 27, 2019 at 10:02 AM Thank you very much Kim :)

Quoth Theraven October 26, 2019 at 4:20 PM Heidi, It's a special treat reading these poems for Line's October Sun Poetry Contest. Your poem is proof of this. Have a nice day.., and best of luck in the contest. -Richard Heidi Sands October 26, 2019 at 4:55 PM Hi Richard. Thank you very much. I am happy you like it. Have a nice evening :)

Panagiota Romios October 26, 2019 at 4:10 PM One of your best... Panagiota Xxx Heidi Sands October 26, 2019 at 4:15 PM That is nice of you to say. Thank you Panagiota. I appreciate your support and kindness :)

Vijay Pandit October 26, 2019 at 2:28 PM Scenic October in every verse..great imagery, Heidi. All the best. Heidi Sands October 26, 2019 at 2:57 PM Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your comments :)

Eve Roper October 26, 2019 at 12:04 PM Heidi, good imagery .. enjoyed reading. Weather is changing and the cool breeze is just wonderful making everything move with joy. Hugs Heidi Sands October 26, 2019 at 12:11 PM Hi Eve. I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for your kind comment :)

Jan Allison October 26, 2019 at 12:01 PM I feel a warm glow reading your lovely lines heidi:-) hugs Jan xx Heidi Sands October 26, 2019 at 12:11 PM That is great to hear. Thank you Jan :)