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October Sun

The October sun beamed down on my face As the leaves twirled around me, in this place Shades of blue decorated the sky, above As I tried to capture a warm glimpse of love Waiting for me, where trees held color tight With warm breeze messages sent through the night Then there it was, up above in my sight Scrolled by clouds, in wind currents of flight A splendor of all that I need to know Wrapped around me, in the sunshine’s glow Heidi Sands 10/26/19

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 11/24/2019 6:47:00 PM

Lovely Heidi. And so many here feel the same.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 7:15:00 AM

Thank you Sandy :)

Ann Foster

Date: 11/4/2019 8:43:00 AM

This made me smile and grab my jacket. hehe. Hugs. Ann

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2019 1:48:00 PM

Thank you Ann :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/31/2019 6:01:00 AM

Fabulous poem Heidi. Good luck in Line's contest.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2019 1:48:00 PM

Thank you Caren :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/28/2019 7:53:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful my friend. A poem of nature and love, what could be better? Best wishes in the contest my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/28/2019 8:06:00 AM

Hi Chris. That's right, what could be better to write about ? Thank you very much :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/28/2019 6:14:00 AM

- A lovely October sun, Heidi :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/27/2019 9:11:00 PM

My Heidi, this poem is so lovely. The sun is appreciated even more when it appears less. This sweet poem is a Fave for me Heidi. I loved it! : ) xxoo

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/27/2019 12:03:00 PM

WoW!! You are glowing with the October Sun...loved this my poetic sister...sure to place high Heidi...a fav my friend...^WW^ :o)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/27/2019 2:40:00 PM

Thank you WW. I appreciate your kind comment and support :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/27/2019 7:43:00 AM

A lovely write...Peaceful with much appreciation...

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/27/2019 10:03:00 AM

Thank you Arturo. I appreciate your visit and comment. I hope you enjoy the day :)

Silent One

Date: 10/27/2019 4:23:00 AM

It has been raining all month... floods in some parts.. but sun is out today.... nice poem..

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/27/2019 10:03:00 AM

Oh, that sounds like a lot of rain Silent One. I am glad the sun is out for you today. Thank you :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/27/2019 3:53:00 AM

Celebrating October's glory in a marvelous poetic rapture! Excellent dearest, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/27/2019 10:02:00 AM

Hi Demetrios! Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/26/2019 9:57:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Heidi,

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/27/2019 10:02:00 AM

Thank you very much Kim :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/26/2019 4:20:00 PM

Heidi, It's a special treat reading these poems for Line's October Sun Poetry Contest. Your poem is proof of this. Have a nice day.., and best of luck in the contest. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/26/2019 4:55:00 PM

Hi Richard. Thank you very much. I am happy you like it. Have a nice evening :)