Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

October Sun

the sun is dripping yellow honeysuckle  
of October blooms golden strands of silk 
as the wind plays tag trying to milk 
the running brown leaves shadows 
tango with sunlight 
Putting up a good fight

restless cat's meow soaking up that sun 
purple figs hang heavy still so much fun 
nothing holds October beauty 
like the skies tinted tangerine 
nothing is quite as supreme


Date:10/25/2019
Contest:October Sun
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 26, 2019 at 8:33 AM Such cool autumn breeze imagery in this elegant poem, Brenda. Loved the crescendo ending: nothing holds October beauty like the skies tinted tangerine ... nothing is quite as supreme. All memorable poems have a great ending. As does yours. Pure poetry. Love and hugs forever. Brenda Chiri October 26, 2019 at 8:35 AM AhhhFreddie you are so sweet!;) and here's sending hugs and love forever back to you! So happy to see you again!;)

Ts Poetry October 26, 2019 at 8:06 AM I need the sun B, send it my way Brenda Chiri October 26, 2019 at 8:24 AM Sent T hope it keeps you warm!;)

John Fleming October 26, 2019 at 1:30 AM I think Mr Gauthier will appreciate this little offering of yours, Brenda...comforting a soul with vibrantly painted images promoting gently warming, inner glows -- quite lovely! Fondest thoughts. :) john Brenda Chiri October 26, 2019 at 3:30 AM Ahhh thank you so much John! What would I do without you stopping to comment on my work! My number one is what you are my dear!;) much affection!;)

Winged Warrior October 25, 2019 at 10:56 PM Oh! my sissy in the October Sun...you look radiant...its here Bren...have a gander...and please don't hit me if you don't like it lol...bro bro Brenda Chiri October 25, 2019 at 11:05 PM Bro bro you are so clever and I see there are more parts to it!( did that make sense?) thank you bro bro and cant wait to read the next part!;) love ya bro!;)

Quoth Theraven October 25, 2019 at 10:56 PM Brenda, I like your October's better still. The script has been worth the trip. -Richard Brenda Chiri October 25, 2019 at 11:06 PM Ahhh Richard thank you so very much! I love when you stop by for s visit! ;)