October Sun

We sit outside and bask in brilliant sun—
And though it’s warm, we know it cannot last,
For August’s days of glare and heat are done;
October’s sunny days are speeding past.

In youth, one summer seemed to last an age—
The days that lingered, sunsets without end. 
What seemed perennial was just a stage
As, growing up, we came to comprehend.

And though the warmth recedes as winter nears,
Resist the urge to panic or to mourn--   
At dawn upon the Solstice, Sol appears:
With sempiternal rhythm, light is born.

October 23, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kulkarni Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Such a beautifully written poem!
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 7:05 PM
beautifully expressed, i especially love the final stanza, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 6:15 PM
This is exquisite JP! It goes a tiny bit past a sonnet, but to remove even one line would degrade its beauty. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving Third placement! This beauty is a Fave for me! : )
Lawless Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 4:01 PM
...cue the dancing shadows....the sun has returned...like this treatment of the theme JP
Gauthier Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 1:44 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, JP. Loved your poem. Thanks for entering my contest.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 2:45 AM
Very good October Sun poem. Best wishes in the contest. God bless you, Gina
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