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October Sun

We sit outside and bask in brilliant sun— And though it’s warm, we know it cannot last, For August’s days of glare and heat are done; October’s sunny days are speeding past. In youth, one summer seemed to last an age— The days that lingered, sunsets without end. What seemed perennial was just a stage As, growing up, we came to comprehend. And though the warmth recedes as winter nears, Resist the urge to panic or to mourn-- At dawn upon the Solstice, Sol appears: With sempiternal rhythm, light is born. October 23, 2019

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Date: 11/15/2019 2:22:00 PM
Such a beautifully written poem!
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Date: 10/30/2019 7:05:00 PM
beautifully expressed, i especially love the final stanza, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/30/2019 6:15:00 PM
This is exquisite JP! It goes a tiny bit past a sonnet, but to remove even one line would degrade its beauty. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving Third placement! This beauty is a Fave for me! : )
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Date: 10/30/2019 4:01:00 PM
...cue the dancing shadows....the sun has returned...like this treatment of the theme JP
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Date: 10/30/2019 1:44:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, JP. Loved your poem. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 10/24/2019 2:45:00 AM
Very good October Sun poem. Best wishes in the contest. God bless you, Gina
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