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October Soared Temperature

Hi guys go through my new poem. OCTOBER-SOARED TEMPERATURE Extemporing October heat, October heat, You always dance with the flaming beat. Not like September, Sophisticatedly you treat, Removing water from taste buds when we eat. Oops, not again you act like an evil! Exchanging heat, You rose a notch, Excreting perspiration through the pores of body, You hikingly botch. Blending the temperature with moistened air, Bless us with the Somatic sensation of cold, which is obviously fare. Whoa, by then everybody will be amazed! Ivory nuts of the earth's palm, Stresslessly you be so calm. Awfully you pour some rain, Frantically we will be so madly insane. Dont inject blusterous blaze on the seashore. Ouch, that really hurts! Flaring star with high intensity, Melting down the earths dignity. Scotch your heightening desire, Briskly inhale refreshing breathe. Ohhh boiling Sun, shade under your sheathe! As like tempting cheesy dip, Magical smile will appear between the paired lips. Hold your stubborn heat back, Begging you please not to swindle and smack. Alas, mercilessly accomplish your goal! Radiating solar, dont propagate your burning rays, Serenely shower your pleasant warmth, every day. Glacial winds please wrap around, Happily waving everybody I will found. Woohoo, Rosaceously waiting for glint of dawn! By Madhavi

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Date: 10/5/2013 3:26:00 PM
Very well written...Kamaal kar ditta.
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 10/8/2013 11:27:00 AM
Thanks Anamika for appreciating my poem :) @madhavi
Date: 9/30/2013 10:21:00 AM
beautiful poem!
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 10/8/2013 11:28:00 AM
Thanks Arthur for appreciating my poem..@madhavi
Date: 9/25/2013 11:26:00 AM
Awesome work Madhavi , regards C.S
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 9/25/2013 11:48:00 AM
Thanks C.S.
Date: 9/20/2013 6:28:00 AM
HI, Nice write that has a melodic flow.. Ken
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 9/24/2013 10:50:00 AM
Thanks Ken..

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