John Lawless Poet Haiku

October Sky - Three Haiku

October Sky – three haiku


#1

lightning strobes hearts
thunder uncoiling whips crack
eye stinging terror




#2

frosted exodus
wingtips warming on the fly
suns iced crystal glare





#3

cold hoar frost rainbow
saddened cornucopia
tears of failing sun




John G. Lawless
8/19/2015

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Sara Kendrick August 23, 2015 at 7:31 AM Very creative works for a contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the congratutory visit to my page..Sara John Lawless August 23, 2015 at 7:40 AM Always good to hear from you Sara, thanks for stopping to read and comment

Andrea Dietrich August 20, 2015 at 7:10 PM very descriptive writing, John. Her contests are sure inspiring! John Lawless August 23, 2015 at 7:39 AM Yup, October runs the gamut from harvest to hoar frost. Thanks for stopping by Andrea.

Anu Nayak August 19, 2015 at 1:55 PM Dear John, beautiful haiku....like three gems:-)7!!...love, Anu:-) John Lawless August 23, 2015 at 7:38 AM Thanks for visiting and commenting Anulaxmi, appreciate the high mark. I view Haiku as individual, three line, poetic writes that should stand alone so I separated them to emphasize their individuality.