David Mohn Poet Haiku

October Sky - Haiku

scarecrow’s pale shadow
  moves across the brittle corn…
        harvest moon rising

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       autumn’s fiery dawn
  gently stirs a caldroned lake…
       mallards flying south 

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           frigid cobalt blue
starkly frames a weathered nest…
         leafless maple tree


        non traditional haiku

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Skat A September 2, 2015 at 12:05 AM David, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 31, 2015 at 4:59 AM Wonderful string of haikus David! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2015 at 4:05 PM I prefer your non traditional to many of these I have seen. Though almost all the October sky haiku have been very good, I think your set is one of the best.

Paul Callus August 24, 2015 at 4:13 PM Poetically and visually lovely ~ I can already see this one on the winners' list! All the best. // paul

Jan Allison August 23, 2015 at 4:18 PM absolutely delightful imagery David I have finally finished mine today:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7