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October Sky

in a veil of clouds on a misty charcoal morn October drifts in clouds of smoky grey cast a shade of autumn's chill on lost summer smiles then at eventide pumpkin colored skies breathe life into twilight time

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Date: 8/20/2017 6:41:00 PM
I love this Haiku. Very well written. A favorite! :)
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Date: 9/2/2015 10:35:00 PM
came back to say: hip hip hooray!! Big congrats for your win.
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:05:00 AM
Joseph, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
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Joseph May
Date: 9/2/2015 7:18:00 AM
Thank you for my placement Skat...hugs
Date: 8/31/2015 4:58:00 AM
Wonderful string of haikus Joseph! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/31/2015 1:18:00 AM
I loved these Joseph many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/29/2015 9:18:00 PM
I fell in love with your beautiful October Sky which captivated me with awesome imagery! This is definitely a winner! A-7! Pandita
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Date: 8/27/2015 10:57:00 PM
wow, How I love these October sky haiku. YOURS TOO!!!
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Date: 8/25/2015 8:44:00 PM
Lovely Joseph! FAVORITE LINE: "...on lost summer smiles". {:-D Best of Luck to you!
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Date: 8/25/2015 12:15:00 PM
wonderful imagery Joseph I particularly love the very apt the pumpkin coloured skies:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Joseph May
Date: 8/25/2015 4:29:00 PM
Thank you Jan

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