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October Skies

Cerise fiery flames roasted jalapeno clouds... crimson and scarlet Orange sherbet clouds dipped in creamy chocolate... a twilight surprise Pink lemonade skies color cotton candy clouds... dusk takes on a blush (Haiku) 8/20/2015
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Watt Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 10:04 PM
Beautiful images, both in haiku and pictures. I would love to taste that orange sherbet dipped in chocolate! Congrats on your win, my friend ~ John
Pinet Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Thanks John, your comments are most welcome, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 3:30 PM
wow it is SO good to read these again Emile, wishing you best wishes for the new year:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Thanks Jan, you know how to create a smile my friend, Emile.
A  Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Emile, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
Pinet Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 8:10 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate the opportunity to participate in your contest. Emile.
Allison Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 5:46 AM
I really loved these Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 8:09 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 5:02 AM
Wonderful string of haikus Emile! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!
Pinet Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 7:53 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate it. Emile.
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Wonderful write you have captured the true nature of sky a 7 and good luck in the contest. Hugs dear friend Eve
Pinet Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 6:32 PM
Thank you so much Eve, I appreciate it. Emile.
Breidenthal Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 8:50 AM
Absolutely delightful set of haiku - delicious, vivid, and welcoming to read....also those photos sure are easy on the eye... that third photo is particularly gorgeous....and the first haiku is hot damn good! Always, Laura
Pinet Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 10:08 AM
Thanks so much Laura, as always I appreciate your kind support and wonderful comments. Emile.
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 3:17 PM
WOW Emile this is a stunning string of haiku good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 6:58 PM
Thank you so much Jan, your comments and support are appreciated Emile.
Nunez Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 7:27 PM
Awesome imagery on this string of haiku, Emile! A very strong contender for top podium, IMHO. Kim
Pinet Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 7:14 PM
ooh, I love this set. So colorful and scrumptious like sweet food!! One of the best I have seen.
Pinet Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your kind words of support. Emile.
Merryman Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Your three haiku pop with vibrant color and description! Best wishes in the contest, Emile! Love, Kim
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 2:22 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Smith Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 11:25 AM
Love the different images and tastes you give this piece....good luck Emile
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 11:54 AM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate it. Emile.
Celestial Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 10:24 AM
This one is great Emile! It will take miles ahead with many entries... Good luck!
Celestial Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 10:43 AM
Welcome! Good luck to us!
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Thanks Marvin, I appreciate your support and kind words. Emile.
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