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October Skies

Cerise fiery flames roasted jalapeno clouds... crimson and scarlet Orange sherbet clouds dipped in creamy chocolate... a twilight surprise Pink lemonade skies color cotton candy clouds... dusk takes on a blush (Haiku) 8/20/2015
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Date: 12/29/2020 10:04:00 PM
Beautiful images, both in haiku and pictures. I would love to taste that orange sherbet dipped in chocolate! Congrats on your win, my friend ~ John
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/30/2020 6:24:00 AM
Thanks John, your comments are most welcome, Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/29/2020 3:30:00 PM
wow it is SO good to read these again Emile, wishing you best wishes for the new year:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/30/2020 6:22:00 AM
Thanks Jan, you know how to create a smile my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/2/2015 12:07:00 AM
Emile, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/2/2015 8:10:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate the opportunity to participate in your contest. Emile.
Date: 8/31/2015 5:46:00 AM
I really loved these Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/2/2015 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 8/31/2015 5:02:00 AM
Wonderful string of haikus Emile! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/31/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 8/28/2015 2:58:00 PM
Wonderful write you have captured the true nature of sky a 7 and good luck in the contest. Hugs dear friend Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/28/2015 6:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 8/27/2015 8:50:00 AM
Absolutely delightful set of haiku - delicious, vivid, and welcoming to read....also those photos sure are easy on the eye... that third photo is particularly gorgeous....and the first haiku is hot damn good! Always, Laura
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/27/2015 10:08:00 AM
Thanks so much Laura, as always I appreciate your kind support and wonderful comments. Emile.
Date: 8/23/2015 3:17:00 PM
WOW Emile this is a stunning string of haiku good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/23/2015 6:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan, your comments and support are appreciated Emile.
Date: 8/20/2015 7:27:00 PM
Awesome imagery on this string of haiku, Emile! A very strong contender for top podium, IMHO. Kim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/21/2015 9:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 8/20/2015 7:14:00 PM
ooh, I love this set. So colorful and scrumptious like sweet food!! One of the best I have seen.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/21/2015 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your kind words of support. Emile.
Date: 8/20/2015 12:02:00 PM
Your three haiku pop with vibrant color and description! Best wishes in the contest, Emile! Love, Kim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/20/2015 2:22:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 8/20/2015 11:25:00 AM
Love the different images and tastes you give this piece....good luck Emile
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/20/2015 11:54:00 AM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 8/20/2015 10:24:00 AM
This one is great Emile! It will take miles ahead with many entries... Good luck!
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 8/20/2015 10:43:00 AM
Welcome! Good luck to us!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/20/2015 10:39:00 AM
Thanks Marvin, I appreciate your support and kind words. Emile.
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