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October Moon

gently beaming just above you tempt me with your glowing charm and stir within these thoughts of love while sending softly fear’s alarm. and on this late October eve with chill of autumn in the air while in the shadows soft you weave a decadence, with face so fair. your softness shown and love implied that tangles softly round my flesh while baiting passions far and wide I can’t resist your lunar mesh. surrounded by this tempting glow as golden hue caresses skin my wanton passions overflow a captive of this carnal sin. now my resistance growing weak with tempting beauty glowing bright she leaves me so I cannot speak this mistress of the autumn night. September 29, 2019

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Date: 5/2/2022 12:22:00 PM
"your love tangles softly round my flesh." This thought leaves me breathless. There is something magical about such a moment. Very exciting and inviting indeed. I was thinking of my "October Moon" poem and wanted to read this again. Our *October* poems could collide, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/2/2022 4:44:00 PM
Her lunar mesh that baits the passions is hard to resist as it softly tangles my being. I must go back and read your “October Moon” perhaps our thoughts will collide. Tender hugs, John
Date: 10/12/2019 1:22:00 PM
A truly wonderful poem John, and written so beautifully!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/13/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thank you for your comments, Kelly, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John
Date: 10/6/2019 11:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/6/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 10/6/2019 11:10:00 AM
Just popped back to your poem to say congratulations on your win :-) x
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/6/2019 12:27:00 PM
Thank you, Elaine, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Date: 10/5/2019 12:47:00 PM
John beautifully done congrats on your 2nd place win!;)
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/5/2019 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, Bren, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Date: 10/4/2019 2:32:00 PM
An awesome Autumn love poem - I adore Autumn, it inspires me and the cold is not really a penetrating cold, quite cold morning and evening but a beautiful warm, colorful season in fact in South Africa, I would our Autumn days are warm. Great poem my friend. Hugs, Jenn.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/4/2019 4:04:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Jenn, I always enjoy hearing from you. Have a great weekend! Hugs, John
Date: 10/2/2019 5:23:00 PM
"you tempt me with your glowing charm" Is that so?? :) Seems the Moon is being playful- cascading shadows. As desires are found, in the tenderness of the night. Your thoughts are so beautiful and romantic, with a hint of passion. Simply breathtaking my dear friend. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/3/2019 4:31:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts and comments, B, the night time brings thoughts of passion and they are fueled by the soft glow of the moon. All the best my dear friend. Hugs, John
Date: 10/2/2019 12:54:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your talent, picturing the beauty of the moon through lovely words. God bless you.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/2/2019 6:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Elaine, I appreciate it. John
Date: 9/30/2019 9:01:00 AM
You’ve captured the beauty of the moon so well. I love this :-) x
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/30/2019 12:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Elaine, I'm glad you liked it. John
Date: 9/29/2019 7:32:00 PM
The glory and the color of harvest time resonates in your poem, enjoyed much !
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/29/2019 8:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Elisa, I appreciate your comments and visit. All the best. John
Date: 9/29/2019 9:35:00 AM
This flows so well and I love the last 2 lines. Well done John :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/29/2019 11:16:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John

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