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October Eve

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I fell in love one cold lonely October eve, Autumnal equinox as the moon did thieve… I fell to my knees below the October sky, Full of daunting desires not knowing why… I threw kisses amidst the frigid October air, Harvesting embraces within the fanfare. Oct.03.2019 October Contest 45 or Less Words Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/23/2019 7:49:00 AM

Lovely, W.W.! Congratulations!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/22/2019 8:50:00 PM

Very, very romantically and uniquely imaged write, my friend. Congrats on your win in Caren's contest, W.W! Warm Autumn wishes, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2019 7:44:00 PM

Very pretty, the music too! Congrats on the win, WW

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/21/2019 3:20:00 PM

Bak with congrats on your top win, ^WW^.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/21/2019 11:47:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS on your win, WW. Really lovely and appealing. Janice

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/21/2019 10:13:00 AM

Poetic and enchanting little poem, WW! Loved this! :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/21/2019 9:21:00 AM

Ahhh simply beautiful bro bro! Congrats on your win!;)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/4/2019 11:12:00 PM

This is beautiful my Warrior with Wings. Love is a wonderful emotion tangling around the heart. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/4/2019 1:57:00 PM

October has always been my favorite month. I think I would rather "harvest embraces" than harvest crops. You said a lot in just a few lines, Winged Warrior. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/4/2019 1:29:00 PM

October is a favorite month for me. It is a perfect season to fall in love. I adored this WW. xxoo

Chris Green

Date: 10/4/2019 10:54:00 AM

Really cool my friend. You have such talent and it is our good fortune to have the ability to read your work and rejoice in the art that flows from your mind. Best wishes in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2019 8:12:00 AM

- A delightful and masterful poem, W.W. :) - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/4/2019 4:49:00 AM

Another wonderful poem. You write beautifully and I'm blessed to read your amazing creations. I wish you all the best in the contest and send you my prayers - God bless you

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/3/2019 10:00:00 PM

Lovely, WW. Enjoyed your poem.