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October Eve

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I fell in love one cold lonely October eve,
Autumnal equinox as the moon did thieve…
I fell to my knees below the October sky,
Full of daunting desires not knowing why…
I threw kisses amidst the frigid October air,
Harvesting embraces within the fanfare.




Oct.03.2019
October Contest 45 or Less Words
Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/23/2019 7:49:00 AM Lovely, W.W.! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/22/2019 8:50:00 PM Very, very romantically and uniquely imaged write, my friend. Congrats on your win in Caren's contest, W.W! Warm Autumn wishes, Gershon Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/21/2019 7:44:00 PM Very pretty, the music too! Congrats on the win, WW Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 10/21/2019 3:20:00 PM Bak with congrats on your top win, ^WW^. Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 10/21/2019 11:47:00 AM CONGRATULATIONS on your win, WW. Really lovely and appealing. Janice Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 10/21/2019 10:13:00 AM Poetic and enchanting little poem, WW! Loved this! :) Login to Reply

Brenda Chiri Date: 10/21/2019 9:21:00 AM Ahhh simply beautiful bro bro! Congrats on your win!;) Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 10/4/2019 11:12:00 PM This is beautiful my Warrior with Wings. Love is a wonderful emotion tangling around the heart. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/4/2019 1:57:00 PM October has always been my favorite month. I think I would rather "harvest embraces" than harvest crops. You said a lot in just a few lines, Winged Warrior. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/4/2019 1:29:00 PM October is a favorite month for me. It is a perfect season to fall in love. I adored this WW. xxoo Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 10/4/2019 10:54:00 AM Really cool my friend. You have such talent and it is our good fortune to have the ability to read your work and rejoice in the art that flows from your mind. Best wishes in the contest Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2019 8:12:00 AM - A delightful and masterful poem, W.W. :) - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/4/2019 4:49:00 AM Another wonderful poem. You write beautifully and I'm blessed to read your amazing creations. I wish you all the best in the contest and send you my prayers - God bless you Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 10/3/2019 10:00:00 PM Lovely, WW. Enjoyed your poem. Login to Reply