- October -

Hello Anne-Lise, These couplets rendered under the title of "October" (to me) are quite meaningful and bespeak definite images which compare and contrast with one another in a very interesting fashion. What an interesting technique, with the image-statement first, then followed projected result in each couplet. At least this is what I both see and interpret. Short verses in this instance, written cogently and with an immediacy, can be very powerful to the reader. TR/FAV!! Best, Gary

Fantastic Couplets, Anne- Lise! Beautifully painted piece for the month of October dear friend. I enjoyed it!:)) A 7! Sending you my love and prayers! Best to you always!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs! D.

Beautifully expressed, your words paint a wonderful image in my mind.

Very well described:) I like the third stanza, Anne:)

Great words Sunshine x well written x

I love to read poem that concern with NATURE. I love reading it so much. Thanks for posting..........A.M.

Love this line "Stardust, northern lights and moonlight". I felt like as if having the exact feeling you had while writing this, Anne. ;)

You give Autumn a new perspective of life dear, Anne-Lise! Very well done!

welcome to autumn's show, anne.. when do the norther lights appear?.. a beauty this one.. happy huggs

I love the seasons...cant wait to go sledding with the kiddies.

Silver bells and white snow..Oh cant wait..I open Winter with open arms..Just lovely imagery sweet Sunshine.

Beautifully descriptive write Anne Lise - oh how the year is flying by so quickly - can we bypass winter and go straight to spring though!:-( hugs Jan xx