October 3, 2004
-The First Poem I Ever Wrote........................
On October 3, 2004
I felt I didn't want to live anymore
It wasn't my fault what happened to you
I regret it very much and that is very true
I promise you I paid my debt
And I haven't got over it yet
Man I wish you weren't dead
I think it should've been me instead
We should've never went to the factory
That stupid forklift will forever blind me
Every time I'm alone in my room
I think about the death of David Broom
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