October 25, 2015

Children should 
b n bed
One is not
His name is Ned

It is now
Just past nine
And we do not
Think it is fine.

The time will change
And it won't b late
But until then
Just take the bait.

Go to bed
Your name is Ned
Your brother likes
The color red
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December 13, 2015 at 11:48 AM
Cute verse, Jennifer, when I am not sure I place it in free verse.
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February 16, 2016 at 9:03 PM
Thanks. I never know where to actually put them. I wish there was a website that you could input your poems and it would tell you what type it was.
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